The Cry of Otiosity!

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CARPE DIEM2

                                                maņana 3

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  • Ogreatbaldone
    July 12, 2005
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    why put off until tomorrow what you can put off until next week . good luck in the contest

  • MagicLady
    July 12, 2005
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    procrastination, that works for me.

    Cheryl

  • Touchof1der
    July 11, 2005
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    Now this one I totally understand. WooHoo! Goodie for me! I like this color background. Very interesting. I pick this one so far.
    ♥ Kimberly


  • MysticalMelindy
    July 11, 2005
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    LMAO!!!!!

  • Jocelyn Davis
    July 11, 2005
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    I had to read it several times to get the full implication. First the fact that you thought to use two languages; then the irony of the bold, indeterrable, get-up-and-go only to be utterly belied by the little lazy 'later'... and then there's the match and contrast-- the bold, sieze the day is characteristic of the Latin language and their people, but the laid-back "tomorrow" will-do-just-as-well, so reflects the friendly, easy-going Hispanic culture. What a piece of work!

    Fascinating... creativity in itself deserves a cup. I might have thought to use a different language (though I didn't)... but who would have thought to use two? This might win gold were the contest mine, since I love languages-- and like laughable irony and words that say three times what they normally do. Great job! Good luck.

    --Jocelyn
    Edited on Jul 11, 7:50 p.m. because ''.


  • SEA angel
    July 11, 2005
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    Cute

    AllPoetry defintion courtesy of

    [new IM] Andy Stephenson: Carpe Diem I think is latin, certain it means "seize the day". Manana means tomorrow.

    With many thanks to Andy.

    Web definitions to double check:

    Source: Webster's Revised Unabridged Dictionary (1913)

    Otiosity \O`ti*os"ity\, n. [L. otiositas.]
    Leisure; indolence; idleness; ease. [R.] --Thackeray.

    Carpe Diem: Seize the Day

    There was a third word....Hmmmm....maybe I will think of it by today but it I might not until "tomorrow".

    Edited on Jul 11, 3:32 p.m. because ''.

  • miSSareY
    July 10, 2005
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    hehehe, lovely.
    i wouldnt have thought to use a different language!!
    i hope this gets a trophy!


  • neptune386
    July 10, 2005
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    lol. This was great. You think it's all sieze the day...in latin, then tomorrow in spanish. I dunno if you were going for the conflict in language as well as message but I love it anyway!!

    Alyssa

  • Pinkeye Pete
    July 9, 2005
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    Hmmmmm I really don't understand this one. So I'm off for the 40lb dictionary. If I pull a muscle, or pop something it's all your falt Susan.

  • Sarah957
    July 9, 2005
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    Oh this is too funny!


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    July 9, 2005
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    I agree that Yem is pointless...he is a one man Absurdist drama. Beckett couldn't have written him.

    So you are saying he's lazy? Poor lazy Yem.

    Ok, this is funny, creative and yeah, won't be easy to beat...something tells me Yem will be handing out more than 3 trophies.

  • fae
    July 9, 2005
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    You should so win! Excellent. Glad I didn't read this or others before posting my own or I wouldn't have


  • leander
    July 9, 2005
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    aahh... 'Pluk de dag' as we say in Dutch... in fact, a very wonderful message we all should keep in mind each morning when we get out of bed

    Best wishes in this contest

    Leander


  • Mari Goes
    July 9, 2005
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    Very well thought!
    Carpe Diem, todos los dias lol


  • catz
    July 9, 2005
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    Lol... you stick by your guns, Susan....


    Good luck in the contest
    Dee


  • SusanL
    July 8, 2005
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    Yes but that is in English!!!
    You are just jealous because you did not think of it... Besides maņana sounds so much more relaxed than tomorrow...
    Thanks


  • Maatkara
    July 8, 2005
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    LOL! Ah, the futility of it all, hehe.. very clever Susan! Brevity and wit, I love it!

    ~G

  • pattyann4500
    July 8, 2005
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    No fair, Susan! Most of us already know that "Sieze the day" is three words, and "tomorrow" would make it four. Cheater!

  • Im Spiffy
    July 8, 2005
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    haha looks kool but i dont know what it means lol

  • Vickie J
    July 8, 2005
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    This was clever both in content and form~vj

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