I saw it there so I grabbed it. Ever one has once or twice in there life that they want to do something wrong or terrible,I just did it why not you only live once. It was a gun. Black sleek I could see the grip in front of me. i thought about what my da would be if I didnt grab it and I thought about what I would do if I did...I was haveing a bad day to begin with. 1
So I grabbed it. The cop didnt know wat happened the when bullet went his face taking half of it with him and spraying guts on the secretary she was screaming untill I shot her her in the throat. Before she died i looked down and smiled at her I saw I saw the life leave her eyes..She always was a bit of a moron. 2
After grabbing the cops 3 spare clips and his nightstick for fun I walked on. My coworkers were hideing under there desks i walked down past them killing soem fat fuck his fat as was sticking out to fall and i was pissed he was in my way. 3
In the coffe room I drank some guys coke he had his name on it but hey who gives a fuck i was having a bad day. Some security guy ran in he got the baton to the face shattering his noise. blooding was porring out that nice cheap carpt ruined! Oh no what ever will I do! ha! I tried something I also wanted to..spoon some eyes out. It was fun well the first one popped that was a bummer but the 2d came out nicely shoved it down his throat and shoved a butter knife in his juggular. 4
I decided to go get a cup of coffee in my bosses office he has the best and i didnt get mine this morning. Hmm I wonder if it may be the reason for my mood.oh well sucks to be them!5
I stopped at this one womans cubicle she was still hideing some had fled but she was cowering. I beat he to death with a frammed photo of her cat mister bigglers as it said on the frame..i hoep that cat gets a good home it would be shame if he didnt.6
Sure enough my boss was there sitting behind his desk like the arragont little fuck that he is!!! That makes me mad!! So fucking goddamn mad!! I didnt say a word I had a cup of coffee from his pot then threw the rest in his bland face. and walked up to him. 7
The two rounds in his knees made it so he count run away and useing a pen knife made it sure he couldnt scream..I still got that tongue. The phone rang and I picked it up his fuck hole of a wife heard him scream and I beat his face in and then shot him in the face after I got bored. I could hear the cops comming down the road. My time was short so much more to do so little time!!!8
walking to around killing who ever was left i started to sing someware over th rainbow. Any one who saw my face was dead by then i wiped the gun and hide in a closet the cops "saved"me and that was that. 9
and to think what had my cup of coffee that morning. 10
Author notes
Yup it came to me i put it down and i went to bed.
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Comments
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Th flow was somewhat awkward and there were quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes. I also think it could be a little more descriptive as well. I'd also like to no more about this guy and why he decides to shoot up his office. Other than that, decent story. I liked that he sang 'Somewhere Over the Rainbow' in the end. A nicely dark bit. Thanks and good luck in my contest.
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woah rage at work


