The Final Strike: Chapter Three: It was Never Worth it

Fayt never thought of the biggest consequence. He knew that if Recade attacked they would be dead, but what he didn’t know happened. They never attacked. Their most precious weapon was gone because of a 5 year old. One thing that Recade never planned, for it to be destroyed. 1

Someone has been leaking information to Recade. Another big problem. Fayt doesn’t know who this is and doesn’t even know it is happening. But, whoever it is, told Recade that Fayt has left to get Blade’s new sword. Recade has a plan. They always have a plan.2

Fayt will take days to get to the destination. They have the sword that Fayt needs. It has all the power and more. Blade has no idea how long it is going to take the God, his father. 3

Blade, still unconscious, is a very easy target. After that change, he has been off and on. The Recade want his power. They want him to be on the Recade side. But they know that will never happen so they have to force it. It is going to happen. With no army, Recade has no chance for this action. They are going to have to use their “leaker”. Once Chaos learns who it is then, that person might be assassinated. A problem for Recade. They know that this person is vital to them. 4

According to their “leaker”, Fayt left to find the most powerful sword. He left a couple hours ago and won’t be coming back for some days. He recommends an attack or a action of any kind on Chaos. Or something that will help them and not Chaos. Recade might just hold off until their army is fully loaded. That could take years. 5

That item is starting to glow, becoming holy. A light that can kill the strongest man. If the powers reached to full, Chaos can have a problem. 6

Fayt is surprised. He is now one day from the destination, that he knows from past experiences. Now, he has been captured by quicksand. He took a unfamiliar route. Another regretted mistake. Now another problem exists. Is quicksand lighting proof? A thunder storms is coming by. And he is sinking little by little. No god power can get him out of this. Well, maybe one. He is a dark god. And dark gods have what power……? To control hell. Without hands he brings out hell from hiding. All of the lava is pouring out from the ground. He just thought of something, how is that going to help? But, he stopped sinking. He could touch the bottom!!! It wasn’t that deep. Fayt still needs to get out. If he tries then he will just sink down to the same spot. This might take longer then he imagined.7

The “leaker” has appeared back at Chaos to take care of Blade. But that is not his real mission. He is going to take him- dead or alive. This can cause more problems to Chaos. If like they don’t have enough. If they get him. No one knows what will be put though. As long as there is someone in the room when the “leaker” tries, he can’t get a hold of him. 8

Well, he got him. Blade has been reported missing and the mission in command is gone also. Do you think they both were kidnapped? Nope. Chaos is in deep deep water now. With the prince in Recade’s hands, and Fayt trapped, Chaos could fall apart.9

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Hey Chapter three aren't u proud of me!!! This one is really really really really good!! I hope u like it !!! it is edited tell me if ne mistakes

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  • nessundorma
    July 12, 2005
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    ok hurry up i cant stand waiting fro the next chapter. ok ill put on the new poem im working on and you got write the next chapter!!!! I hate waiting....

  • Diabolikal Sins
    July 12, 2005
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    soon enough my friend

  • EmsandAbs
    July 11, 2005
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    When's the nextchapter. i know its gonna be great!
    -emz...write when u get the minspiration


  • CaliGirl09
    July 8, 2005
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    Its great i like your story cant wait till the next chapter keep writing .

    ~Sadlove~

  • Diabolikal Sins
    July 8, 2005
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    thanx


  • Gentle Android
    July 8, 2005
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    I'm just trying to help.
    -Vasquine.

  • Diabolikal Sins
    July 8, 2005
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    yeah i am happy wit ur comments
    if u are confused i will explain i am writing this way for a reason i am trying to write a story wit no talkin u r the only one u told me what was wrong as u can see i am glad u read it too
    ~Stay Evil~
    **DevilDemon**


  • Gentle Android
    July 8, 2005
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    Like I said on the first chapter, this reads so differently. It's like a prologue, not a story.
    -Vasquine.


  • nessundorma
    July 8, 2005
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    yeah great chapter once again. Waiting for the next...


  • Sealight
    July 8, 2005
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    Why are you making it soooooooooooooooooooooooooo suspenceful?? PLEASE write more. It's really really really really really really good!!!!!!!!!

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