Far in the ocean under the belly of the sea their lived a woman that was cold as ice and not a very nice person to talk to. She weave thriugh life as young as she wants to she never age in time and never fallen in love with no man. Times comes and goes like they have been going for the Ice Queen, she sometimes cry to herself longing for a lover that would never come she pray to the cold god, god of ice and snow knowen as icesses. She found cold in every turn looking for warmth, hot and steamy love, but what was coming from the north to the south was going to save her cold and broken heart.1
The ocean was in a sleep when a boat was coming through on a travel cruze full of people and kids.The Ice Queen heared the boat moder running the ocean water she looked up and swimmed to the top of ocean peek to the grand boat. As she looked above the water she seen the man that would save her cold broken heart as she looked at him in the boat looking out in the ocean. He seen the ocean over a million time he was a ocean by heart, mind, body and soul everything that he does was in the ocean and never less.
He looked on as nothing was going on until he seen the sight of a lifetime a woman in the ocean looking at him all in blue from head to toe even her hair was mushed blue. He held his hand and yeld at her but no answer came from her as he want on in the cruze she feilt a pull towards the man that she seen in the boat.
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OMG ...this is sooooooooooo awesome and i love it...' love it..keep it up the good work my dear !!!!!
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I think it is a beautiful piece. It reminds me of a poem as well. But you have sooo many spelling puntuation and basic english communication mistakes. Might want to use spell check and proof read it before you submit. It doesn't make sense in some parts. I still like it though. :-)
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What a great write. Gave me all the feelings of the expression that the poem has deep inside. I really love this piece. It is really worth reading it..love it

