This be te tale of Light and Sound1
And how with Rain it came to be found2
One night in the home of the Spirits3
The littlest one made a cry so soft, only two could hear it4
The Spirit of Water disappointed and sullen5
Shed tears onto the world until approached by the God of Sound all of the sudden6
"What is wrong? Why so sad?7
I know, I will do something that will make you glad!"8
At that, Sound raised his hands and they collided9
Sending a sonorous boom to the people who were then frightened10
The Spirit of Water let out a little laugh of joy11
For the Sound had made the entire Earth his toy12
In the distance came another Spirit13
One who wasn't too far not to hear it14
"What are you two doing? Making all this using chatter15
I too will like to know what is the matter."16
"I am trying to make Water smile.17
Something that you haven't done in awhile."18
Lightning, now with a frown on her face,19
Thought of a way to put Sound in his place20
After rubbing her hands, she released a lightning bolt21
Causing a chill to run down the spine of the humans with a jolt22
Water rolled around on her cloud23
"Top that will ya," Lightning said to Sound24
The King of Spirits now got very mad25
These actions, he thought, should not have been had26
In his fit of rage he called on Sound and Lightning27
To truly understand why his own were fighting28
After explaining to their wise King29
He sat on his throne and couldn't say a thing30
"I understand why you both have taken these actions31
So I have an idea that will give all great satisfaction32
Whenever it rains on the Earth33
Lightning shall act first34
Next and not too far to bound35
Shall be you, the thunderous Sound."36
And now my friends, I have told ye37
Of how Lightning and Thunder came to be38
Author notes
The rhyming is cheesy and a little forced
Comments
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moving, uplifting
Nice, sort of moving in its own way I suppose. Its is ok.

beginning: 2, language: 2, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 2, characters: 3.
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thanks
thank you its my first one. im new at this.
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This is interesting but not my type of read. ugh, dunno what to say.

