Haunt

I saw your face and tears welled up in my dry throat but i still carried on stabbing your lifeless body heartlessly, i had nothing to lose.1

Still, all these years later your hollow eyes still haunt my darkest dreams.2

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  • unsexypenguin
    July 7, 2005
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    Deep. This is awesome. I get this visual of this and it's very creepy. I can see a guy holding down a female and he's stabbing her over and over again. I think that the rage was caused by jealousy, at least that's what I can think because even after the death the killer kept stabbing to get revenge instead of doing harm. I also love the fact that you did the before and after thing, most of the entries just have the act none have really put how the killer felt afterward; what his thoughts, feelings, regrets were. You also described this as a physical act, but I've done this several times in my mind. Someone's hurt me and I've killed their memory, but even as years pass sometimes they're "hollow eyes" seem to haunt my thoughts. This is great. Thank you so much for entering.

    -Miranda