There is no way I can live without you. Everyday I go on without you is like living in a world where theres no oxygen. When I feel you brush past me, my blood turns ice cold and I feel an adrenaline going through my veins. I love you, unconditionly.
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I'd like to make it into a longer, say 200 words, story. Expressing how deeply she loves him.
A contest entry
- 30-50 words by Maggie Kay.
130 points, ended April 20, 17 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
I had to cram everything into 50 words, but there was so much i wanted to put into it, Did you like it? Do you think it is worth doing a larger story?
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Its a great starting idea. every discriptive for such little amount of words.
Great job to get all the important infomation in.
Keep it up !
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