The Cullen’s looked surprised when I told them I was killed when I got hit by a car. “You were killed?!” Esme said surprised and heartbroken at the same time. The rest of the family looked just as heartbroken. “Yeah I was walking home from a friend’s house after watching…..a……movie.” I said not wanting to tell them what movie I was watching exactly. ‘How did I become a vampire though? I don’t remember much.’ I thought, and I watched Edward’s face wrinkle in confusion. ‘I’ll just think about it later.’ I though putting it to the back of my mind. 1
Rosalie looked at me like I was some type of vermin that crawled in threw a crack in the floor. I slowly just inched away from her to Alice who was closest to me at the moment. “I hope you don’t mind going to school?” Alice asked excitedly. I look at her then quickly try to find an escape route. Just then the door bell rang. ‘Looks like lady luck decided to shine on me today!’ I said getting ready to run for the door. 2
Alice appearently knows that I’m going to run. “Edward don’t let her get away!” Alice says just as I get to the door. I open the door to see Bella standing there! ‘I can’t run! I don’t know if they have relevield that they are vampires or not!’ I thought coming to a neck breaking stop. 3
Once I come to a stop I feel arms come around me from the back. I stiffened at first, but then I realized that it was Edward so I realixed. “Hey Bella, why didn’t you call first?” Edward asked from behind me. Bella glared at me. I would too if I found my boyfriend/or crush holding some woman that I don’t know. 4
“I thought that I would surprise you, but I can see that I’m not wanted here!” She said running from the house. I stood there surprised, that wasn’t supossed to happen. I tore myself from Edwards grip and ran after Bella. “Bella wait, you’ve got to listen to me! It’s not what it seems!” I said eaisly catching up to her. 5
I grabbed her arm, spinning her around to face me. “Edward was just keeping me from leaving the house, I’m a recently turned vampire and they don’t want me to kill anyone.” I said trying to get her to come with me. She looked into my eyes and gasped. “Your eyes! They're red!” As she was saying that I could feel the burning in my throat. 6
I pulled her close to me, her scent was intoxicating! ‘No! I won’t loose control!’ I grabbed her and slung her onto my back. Then I ran at vampric speed back to the house. Edward met me at the door. “Take her home.” I growled out. ‘And explain to her that I am a newborn, you wanted to keep me from leaving the house that is why we ended up in the position we were in.’ ‘What do you mean?’ He asked back only in his head. ‘I’ll explain when you get back from taking Bella home!’ I yelled. 7
He nodded and quickly made his way to the volo. Bella gave me a quick glace, showing me her simplathy. I saw the rest of the family looking at me. They gasped as well when they looked into my eyes. “I’ve never seen that color of red before!” Carlisle said. “I’ll have to stay away from Bella from now on. I don’t know if I’ll ba able to do that again. I don’t know how you do it Jasper.” I said looking at him with apraise.8
“Maybe we should take you for your first hunt then?” Carlisle suggested. “I think we all agree that we have to hunt soon, so we should all go together.” I nooded my head in agreement, I wasn’t too sure about this hunting thing, I never did like the idea of killing something just to take from it body. “Don’t worry it gets better with time.” Edward said from behind me, making jump a mile in the air. 9
The rest of the family laughed, and I glared at them. “Lets just get this over with, I don’t want to take too long. Sides we have school tomarrow don’t we?” I asked earning bewillered looks from the family, Alice just kept smiling. “How did you know?” Emmett asked. ‘He truly does look like a cuddle bear!’ I said smiling mentaly. Edward covered his mouth in an attempt to muffle his laugh, but it came out as a choking sound. “I don’t know really…….maybe it has something to do with my vampric power?” I thought out loud, then went on thinking. While the rest gained shocked faces. ‘Is it just me or are they getting shocked a lot by me?’ I thought to myself as we made our way to the door. 10
‘Lets just hope that I’m the only one that has become apart of the movie!’ I thought, not realizing that my random thought might have been the worst yet.11
Author notes
Can you please tell me if anyone is out of character? If you have any suggestions I'm willing to listen to them! If you want to know Raiya profile look at the first chapter I put it there. Sorry for the delay!
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Comments
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This was good. I don't think anyone was out of character. I was kind of confused in the middle, but other than that it was great
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I like it... Well in my perspective I have nothing to say...


