The Ghost

After i leave your house i still can feel a ghost of your arm 1

stretched around the back of my blouse, 2

curled over my shoulders,around my neck.3

And i can almost pretend your still here, pressing your body more and more near.4

The scent of your skin haunts me all day, all the time i'm away, and i sing and i sway to every word that you say as it rings in my head. 5

I lay in my bed and i wish you were here even though i know deep inside i'm not the one you hold dear. 6

I'm just a fraud just a cheap little trick just a whore to a prick.7

And i want you so much and i need you to be all that i expect,all that you should be, all that you seem. I need to know thats its not just a dream... 8

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  • Carina.J.LR
    April 25
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    wow i liked it, thats wat i spend most of my time doing. haha lol >smiles<


  • Just Breathe.
    April 20

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    This is a pretty good poem/ story. The rhyming is really good as well. ^-^ Good job! I like it a lot although there is a lot of capatilizing errors. I really like this pem/ story though.

    Good job, and keep it up!