Were(insert biotic form here)

Ok so the other day I was in the cb and i got struck with this idea. Actully Hybrid dragon and theMorpher helped me.1

So anyway I'm tired of all these werewolves running about unchecked. It is time for some variety. 2

So in a alternate universe (obviously) you've got3

rodent4

canine5

feline6

reptile7

avian8

bears9

primate10

equestrian 11

there used to be an aquatic but they were wiped out in a war long ago. Let's see the society is greatly divided between the clans. Rarely unless a festival calls for it, will they interact. Ever since the great battle, which greatly diminished their original numbers, (the list is in order of most abundant to least) they prefer to refrain from long amounts of contact. Each tribe has a shine dedicated to their patron/matron deity. But at the center, where all the boundaries meet, there is a temple is a temple dedicated to Diane. Select children from the best families are chosen to keep her oasis clean and running. 12

sound good? ok this is the plot line i have going so far....13

fifty years ago, high priest from Diane's temple had been ordered to create a temple for her consort, Apollos. Now as the grandchildren of those who built the temple are coming into their own, Apollos feels that the youth have gone a stray. His priest erect a school on the deserted lakes of the Aquain territory. This special school is to be used to rear "unruly" teen from actually delinquency to unwanted offspring. Here for the first time all tribes are gathered under one roof for a prolonged period of time, carrying grudges and bias ideals...14

it's a little dry still. when i dig myself out from underneath my calculus homework i might be able to refine it. But tell me your ideas or suggestions.

Author notes

i might add that nocturnal species will play a major role in this series

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  • TheRanter
    April 23

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    You did it!

    I'm glad you listened to my epictivity, and did something sane! Were(insertbioticanimalhere) will be epic, becuase I had something to do with it. When I read it, I cried....

    Seriously, it was hilarious! I hope to read more of this!

  • Non Paix
    April 20

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    This was...random...different...strange...weird...I like it, lol xD Pretty good description in it, and it is a topic that many people do not think to write about...It is nice to differ from vampires and werewolves and what not. good job


  • ice wolf Greeters member
    April 20

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    Seems like a pretty interesting idea so far. Nocturnals such as wolves, rats, cats, dogs? Or like the modern-day rodents like flying squirrels, armadillos, possums, etc?