Tempting Fire

Alexander Kilt watched the sunset from his office and it was a rare one tonight. The dusk produced a red sky that looked as if the sky was on fire. Purple, orange and red hues combined to create a breathtaking view. As it slowly receded into the horizon and turned to a cloudy moonless night, Alex’s thoughts turned to the email that he received. 1

It was sent to him through a friend and that’s the only reason that he even opened the email. These days, everything was risky. However, this email spoke of a different kind of risk and it had Alex thinking. The email was an invite to a special type of party. The invite said this:2

To whom this tempts,3

A special party is being held and you are called to attend. We promise a night of sensual delight and the quench of your inner fire. Perhaps you may meet the woman who fits you like a glove or provides just a little oasis from the never-ending burn of need. Regardless, tonight is a night that you don’t want to miss.4

Please RSVP by 8pm tonight.5

May all your wonders come true,6

The staff of Tempting Fire7

Alex thought on the invite and while he initially dismissed the notion, he knew that the email did speak truth to him. A fire inside him had raged for several months. No woman that he pleasured seemed to have doused the flames, but it merely ignited a hotter burn inside of him. He did his best to ignore it by working, but he knew that it was only a matter of time until he went crazy. He sent his reply and received directions to the party.8

Meanwhile across the city, Kyra Mabon also read the email and she went to delete it, thinking that it was just spam. However, her friend Melody stopped her.9

“Kyra!” Melody said, looking irritated. “I sent this email to you. I want you to go with me to this party.”10

Kyra looked dubious and said, “Why do you want to go? You know that it’s just some people wanting to play matchmaker.” Her brows furled in confusion. Melody wasn’t one that was adventurous. She was usually the more reserved of the two of them. 11

“I know.” Melody said sheepishly. She blushed and said quickly. “I got the email as well and I want to try it out because I know that I could meet a great guy and have a good time.” Melody blushed. 12

“You know how hard it is for me to try something new. Will you please come with me?” Her eyes pleaded with her words.13

Kyra sighed. Rolling her eyes, she smiled and said, “Fine, but if it turns out to be a scam or fake, I’m so going to tell you that I told you so.”14

Melody jumped up and grabbed her coat. “Come on, the party starts tonight and we’re late.” She dragged Kyra out the door and Kyra couldn’t help but wonder if this was really a good idea.15

Alex pulled up to the address and found himself in front of a two story mansion located on the lake near the city. Several cars were parked up the street and a line had formed going into the mansion. The wait was about an hour in itself. His coat was taken and it seems that men were separated from the women and they were given contracts to sign. 16

The contracts stated that they were to act like gentleman and any aggressive behavior would not be tolerated and they would be removed from the premises. Above all, the contract wanted there to be very clear instructions that this was not for the people looking to take advantage of the opposite sex.17

Alex signed the contract and he was lead into a changing room where he was given a silk blue robe to change into. He was told to strip down to his comfort level and was left alone. He complied, stripping down to his boxers and donning the dark blue robe.18

Kyra and Melody arrived and were given the same contracts. Kyra asked many questions about the process, but the staff was vague and told her that she would have to experience the night herself. 19

Frustrated, Kyra went to leave, but Melody pleaded with her to stay and just enjoy herself for once. Against her better judgment, Kyra signed the papers with Melody.20

Like Alex, they were both sent to separate rooms and instructed to change into red silk robes. Kyra really felt nervous about this, but she realized that she could quiver here and jump at every shadow or she could clamp down on her fear and use it to show confidence and enjoy herself. Smiling to herself, she stripped nude, donned the red silk robe, tied it shut and opened the door.21

A woman was waiting there with a fine silk scarf in her hands. The woman came forward and told her that all participants need to be blindfolded and explore their partners. Kyra raised her eyebrows at this, but took the blindfold from the woman’s hands and tied it around her head.22

The woman took her hand and led her out of the room and down the hall. She was led into a room that smelled faintly of jasmine and lavender and she heard the door close behind her. She also heard thunder and rainfall in the distance.23

She felt her way around the room until she reached the bed. Sitting on the bed, she called out to anyone in the room and she heard only silence. She guessed that she was waiting for someone. Her guess was confirmed when she heard the door creak open and a male voice asking a question.24

Alex was still questioning the woman leading him by the hand. “Why are we blindfolded?” He tugged at the blindfold, but his hand was gently taken away. “I can’t see where I’m going.” He protested.25

“That’s the point, sir. You are supposed to give yourself over to the experience. It would be ruined if you didn’t lose some control.” The woman’s voice was a little amused at this and he was led into the room and the door shut behind him.26

“Hello?” he called, not sure if anyone was here.27

“Hello” a woman’s voice replied. Her voice was sultry and light on the ears. He wanted to hear more of her.28

“Where are you?” he asked, feeling around in the direction of her voice.29

“I’m on the bed” she said and felt his feet touch hers. Raising her feet upwards, she hooked a foot around his leg and brought him to her. Grasping his robe, she brought him down to her.30

Since he was off balance, he landed on the bed on top of her. Both of them laughed and the combined body heat sizzled between them. Her body molded to his and she couldn’t help but feel a hardness come from him resting on her thigh. She grew excited at the heavy warmth and heat started to gather at the junction of her legs.31

She raised her head up and said “Hi.”32

“Hi. Sorry I fell on you.” He said meekly.33

“It’s ok. I caused it, but would you mind rolling off of me?” She asked, her voice holding a husky tone.34

“Sure.” He said, rolling off of her and lying beside her.35

“So how are you tonight?” he asked, laying his head on the bed.36

“I have to say that the night isn’t turning out the way that I expected.” She blindly felt around and drew her finger down his robe to explore his body.37

“Oh and how did you expect it to be?” He asked, curious at both her question and what she was doing with her finger.38

“Terrible and boring.” Her voice caught as she found her way past his robe to his skin and started to rub her fingers up and down his chest. “However, tonight seems to be full of possibilities.”39

Alex chuckled and his breathing deepened as she went lower. “Yes, it seems to be that way, doesn’t it?” His voice was amused and his fingers started to reach for her. 40

Just as Kyra reached past his boxers, Alex was able to untie her robe and explore her newfound flesh to his callused hands.41

When he cupped her breasts and pinched her nipples, her breathing became shallow and she reached for his manhood. His breathing grew ragged as he stood up with her robe in hand and lowered her onto the bed. 42

“Spread out for me, love.” His voice grew hoarse as he removed his blindfold. 43

“Why?” Her voice grew curious. “It’s not like you can see me.”44

“Only in my mind’s eye.” He chuckled. “Spread out for me, love. Let me explore you with my hands.”45

His request made heat rush to her cheeks and wetness pool between her legs. She did as he requested, spreading her legs wide.46

The sight of this gorgeous woman spreading for him was a heady rush. The soft candlelight played along her skin, casting flickering shadows and illuminating randomly to give him images to burn into his brain. Next to the bed, he found a single feather on a tray. 47

Sensual devices and more, he thought to himself as he held the feather and ran his finger up and down the length. This will be interesting, he thought, grinning, as he brought the feather down on her skin.48

She felt a soft, almost barely there, touch starting from her throat and going down her body. The soft light touch circled her breasts, starting with the sides and ending at her nipples. Her breath caught as her nipple was flicked with the feather again and again, causing her nether lips to ignite with liquid heat. 49

She moaned in delight and reached forward, grasping his hips and drawing his head down to hers. She captured his lips and it was sweet delight for both of them as his tongue dueled with hers. They kissed and explored their mouths as surely as their hands did with each other bodies. Every touch aroused and excited them until they fell onto the bed moaning and groaning in uninhibited pleasure.50

They rolled until she was on top and her hands grasped his shoulders as his manhood teased her outer lips. She gasped and shuddered in pleasure as he thrust again and again, searching for her opening. He saw her grin and laugh softly. 51

“Let me help you with that.” She said, her hands running down his chest and grasping his cock. She stroked him once, twice, three times until he groaned and begged her to stop otherwise he would burst.52

She raised herself up with him still in her hand and lowered herself slowly on his cock. Inch by inch, he worked himself deeper into her and it was like a mini orgasm erupted each time that he penetrated further.53

After he was fully sheathed inside her, she didn’t want him to go anywhere and relished the feeling of him inside her. But he had other plans. He slowly raised her body up off his cock and just as the head was at her nether lips, he impaled himself all the way into her, causing her to scream out in ecstasy.54

She raised herself up and down on his cock and when he tried to buck and control the flow, she held him firmly in place with her legs until she felt no movement from him. She bent down and captured his lips with hers in gratitude and then proceeded to ride him for a long while.55

Two times, she brought him close to orgasm, but held off each time until he grew so frustrated that he rolled over with her back on the bed and plunged himself deeply into her with a fierce intensity. She chuckled and then moaned as he thrust again and again. She felt the orgasm coming and said softly:56

“Keep it up, lover. I’m nearly there.”57

Her voice, combined with the feeling of her walls gripping his cock, pushed him over the edge and he groaned out his orgasm. The hot splash of his seed inside her triggered her own orgasm and they held each other for several minutes, riding out the waves of mutual pleasure. 58

Their robes tossed and forgotten on the ground in the midst of their passion, the only thing that was left remaining was the blindfold. Alex removed her blindfold and after a minute, Kyra’s eyes adjusted to the low light.59

“Hiya, stranger.” She said, her lips curling into a grin. “Thank you for such a wonderful time and you cheated.”60

“Do you blame me?” He said, grinning wide. “I’m Alex. What’s your name so that I know what to call the woman who sated my thirst?”61

“Kyra.” She said and then grew close to his ear and whispered softly, “Now, can you do that again to me so that I can scream your name in mind-blowing pleasure?”62

He grinned and complied. The night bled into dawn and the two of them fell asleep, their inner fires quenched.63

Author notes

I hope that this was enjoyed and I hope that you leave comments. If you have criticism, please leave them as well as I do look to improve my work.

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  • Aunt Teenii
    October 14

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    Hunny I have to read your stuff more often... this was incredible... hee hee we'll discuss this later


  • SnowStorm
    August 12

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    Very good story! It was very sensual, and the reader could understand Kyra's frustration and nervousness. I liked the added mystery as well. Great work!


  • Kyndal Laran
    June 10
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    this was brilliant!! wonderful at the most!!
    keep up the great work


  • silkcatseye
    April 22

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    I enjoyed reading your story, I like the way you developed your characters. Your story is well written as always and very descriptive. And good luck in the contest.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Lady Eventide Greeters member
    April 20

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    Well, Mr. Sunshine, you are indeed a master of eros, if indeed I say so myself. I like the fact that you developed their characters a little bit before getting to the love making, such as you always do. Most erotica on this site is rather tasteless, but yours is very passionate...delicate, almost.

    In this story, there are some really nice descriptions that caught my eye: 'As it slowly receded into the horizon and turned to a cloudy moonless night, Alex’s thoughts turned to the email that he received.' and 'The night bled into dawn and the two of them fell asleep, their inner fires quenched.' Beautiful.

    I'm not really an erotica writer, but competing against you would be quite fun...so I may enter this. Let's just say you inspired me. Good luck in the contest.

    Some suggestions and whatnot:

    1. The dusk produced a red sky that looked as if the sky was on fire [it was on fire]. Purple, orange[,] and red hues combined to create a breathtaking view.

    11. She was usually the more reserved of the two of them [del: of them].

    15. She dragged Kyra out the door and Kyra couldn’t help but wonder if this was really a good idea.[She dragged Kyra out the door, who couldn’t help but wonder if this was really a good idea.]

    16. Alex pulled up to the address and found himself in front of a two story [two-story] mansion located on the lake near the city.

    17. The contracts stated that they were to act like gentleman [gentlemen] and any aggressive behavior would not be tolerated and they would be removed from the premises.

    18. Alex signed the contract and he was lead [led] into a changing room where he was given a silk blue robe to change into.

    23. She was led into a room [how does she know it’s another room?] that smelled faintly of jasmine and lavender and she heard the door close behind her.

    24. She felt her way around the room [del: the room] until she reached the bed. Sitting on the bed, she called out to anyone in the room and she heard only silence [but heard only silence].

    26. The woman’s voice was a little amused at this and he was led into the room and the door shut behind him.[The woman’s voice was a little amused at this as she led him into the room and shut the door behind him.]

    28. “Hello” [,”] a woman’s voice replied.

    30. “I’m on the bed” [,”] she said and felt his feet touch hers.

    32. She raised her head up and said[,] “Hi.”

    35. “Sure.” He said, rolling off of [simply: off] her and lying beside her.

    47. The soft candlelight played along her skin, casting flickering shadows [,] and illuminating randomly to give him images to burn into his brain.

    49. She felt a soft, almost barely there, touch starting from her throat and going down her body. The soft light touch circled her breasts, starting with the sides and ending at her nipples. [another word besides ‘touch’ in the second sentence; also, I feel the phrase ‘almost barely there’ distracts me]

    50. They kissed and explored their mouths as surely as their hands did with each other [other’s] bodies.

    53. Inch by inch, he worked himself deeper into her and it was like a mini orgasm erupted each time that he penetrated further. [del: that]

    54. He slowly raised her body up off his cock and [,] just as the head was at her nether lips, he impaled himself all the way into her, causing her to scream out in ecstasy.

    55. She bent down and captured his lips with hers in gratitude and then proceeded to ride him for a long while. [She bent down, captured his lips with hers in gratitude, then proceeded to ride him for a long while.]


  • Lady Pixie Greeters member
    April 19

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    Good work- good story. It was passionate and descriptive but not smutty/slutty at the same time so that was good I really don't have much criticism to offer. Nice work.

    As always, you did well. I liked the plot line/story behind this and the characters were fleshed out well without over doing it.


  • B Chandler Greeters member
    April 19
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    "....herself up and down on her cock....."


    Emphasis on the 'her cock' part I think you might want to change the genderization of that unless I missed something in anatomy of the sex. Wait, when did women get penis'? (not counting the rubber/silicon one)?


    • DarkOneShadow
      April 19
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      Oops...

      I corrected that. Please forgive me for that minor mistake. I was up between the hours of 1am to 4am doing this story. Something fell through the cracks. Thanks for pointing it out.

      DarkOneShadow

  • Mmmm that was a very hot story. I like how the two just gave into to whom ever it was they were placed with. Very erotic just the bedtime story I needed to read Good luck! I hope you win.
    ~Joann

    P.S. Check out my contest too, you might interested. It's sorta an erotic options one.

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