You are here by, henceforth seduced.1
Believe me when I say you are seduced.2
What do you mean, you're not seduced.3
Girl, you have just been seduced and nothing you can say or do will change that.4
I say you have just been seduced. End of discussion.5
What do you mean I am insane?6
What do you mean this an erotic contest.?7
Am I writing humor here?8
You have just undergone seduction and you say that's not erotic.9
To hell with you, lady! I seduced you.10
Shut UP!11
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!12
RAWRRRRRRRRRRR.13
That's it! where's my shot gun. BOOM!14
Now you have been killed, try denying that!15
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!16
A contest entry
- Seduce Me by B Chandler.
180 points, ended May 4, 5 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - ADULT CONTENT! by vampiry Julianna.
180 points, ended May 7, 7 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Short Stories by Violette.
130 points, ended May 1, 13 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ummmm, lets just say this was an interesting read with no seduction value to it at all. i did get a few giggles out of it though, so thats a good thing.
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okay well you killed me which is sad but i think you did a great job on this write i thought it was funny even (i actually giggled a bit) you did an amazingly awesome job and keep up the great work.. oh yeah and thanks for entering this write into my contest i really thought it was interestinly set up like you are only getting one side of the converstation. you did a great job
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This is very dumb.
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thanks.
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umm..this is dumb.
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um....hm....explain? I take criticism only with valid explanation!
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one. you blatantly disregarded the rules.
two. it had no "turn on" ability.
three. it was, all in all, lame, due to poor content.
It wasn't even funny, if thats what you were aiming at.
also, I am a woman, and I would not be seduced by you telling me that I am seduced. You would actually have to seduce me. I'm sure its that way with most women. -
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That's more like it. Thanks for the feedback!
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Some grammatical errors
But great sense of style. I loved your writing and turn of phrase
great work
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You see my point, that's great. But, I don't get my point, can you please explain.
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Um... clearly you didn't get this contest
I see your point and still I see that you need to know that you have not seduced a woman by those words.
Cheerio,
DarkOneShadow
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How?
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I dunno....but somehow this lacks a little finesse
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