Eighteen Candles (pt6)

WickedConfidentfree-spiritedgirl1

I used to be:2

wicked3

confident4

and5

free-spirited6

I was a heart breaker. 7

guys were so gullible8

I could suck them right with my 'charms'9

But I only broke hearts because 10

they would break mine11

and I wasn't going to suffer first12

I was foul mouthed13

Yeah14

I was b----15

Don't mess with me16

was the logo I wore17

I was outgoing18

I could talk to anyone19

I wasn't afraid to try out for the band20

when they were holding auditions21

I went up there and sang my vocal cords sore22

Dare me23

and I did it24

give me a car and I'll be speeding down the highway25

don't leave your car keys behind, I'd say26

cause I'd grab them and be back with a half empty tank27

I was restless28

I could go all night29

~~~~~~~30

Shyquietcharminggirl31

I don't know what the heck he saw in me32

why he even liked me33

I vowed never to give my heart away34

I promised to crush any guy's heart35

before they could36

burn mine to ash37

I didn't try hard enough38

I got weak39

I got shy40

I got quiet41

He won42

He got me43

I was taken44

I was in love45

He knew how to make me smile46

make me laugh47

me me talk48

I blushed everytime he whispered sweet49

affectionate words in my ear50

I clung to him51

like a child52

I was always lost for words53

but he always knew what to say54

he made me feel beautiful55

he made me feel charming56

His kisses made me feel loved57

his arms wrapped around me58

made me feel safe59

No more lonliness60

or61

hollow space62

yeah63

that was me-64

shyquietcharminggirl65

Author notes

sorry its been awhile since I've added more to this story-the internet was down yesterday and i've been busy with the holidays and everything. so anyway-im off to add the next part

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  • Toxic Paradox
    October 26, 2005
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    I do believe I'm becoming one of your regular readers! When i find an author on this site that I really like I tend to read all of their poems and stories and comment on each one. I try to think really carefully about how I comment, so hopefully I can be of some help...


  • CupidsMeth
    August 22, 2005
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    yeah one of my regular readers gets upset when i dont add more to the story!


  • Ray Von
    August 21, 2005
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    So your doing great!!!! I'm glad i didn't read this earlier because I wouldn't be able to wait for da next excellent part.
    Maria