Drowning...

This depth of internal disruption,
Haunting, controlling, never seeming to cease
It lives within me
I lose myself in all the chaos of my mind
I lose all touch with reality
As I am sinking further
It pulls me in
The darkness seeps within
Drowning, effortlessly
I cannot find myself
And nothing makes sense
Confusion, delusion, neverending
Can't resist, can't break me
This new reality
I cannot break free
I fall slowly, and unwillingly
Into you,
As I'm drowning...1

In forbidden love.

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Random! It started out depressing and I just thought of the love part at the end. :]

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  • Just Breathe.
    October 24

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    Wow...o.o A dark poem for my 24/7 hyper twon?!?!? Wow...you must've been like...depressed when you wrote this. T.T But of course, it goes towards something like love. But anyways...

    This is a really good poem, Princess. I love it, it's beautiful and depressing. I am so jealous of your writing. T.T But keep it up.

  • Thats great kid! Keep up the good work!

  • Thats great kid! Keep up the good work!


  • Heropsycho
    April 18

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    This was really good, I like how the mood seemed so dark and depressing, and changed eventually to giving in to forbidden love. I also like that there was no strict rhyme scheme, it made the poem flow a lot more naturally.