A Trip to the farm

One day my brother Kenneth and I were walking to our grandparent’s farm for the first week of summer. There were horses and goats, oh and I can't forget Jackie, our grandma's jack Russell. As soon as I ran to open the gate Jackie was waiting there with grandma Morgan.1

"Hello Tuesday!" Grandma Morgan said "Hi Kenneth" she added when she saw Kenneth.2

"HI GRANDMA MORGAN" Kenneth and I said in at the same time.3

"Okay kids set up in the guest room and I'll your horses ready." Grandma Morgan said heading to the stables with Kenneth following.4

"Okay meet ya there in three minutes." I said running to house filled with excitement. As I ran to the room I stared to take off my book bag and slide off the gamecube travel case from my shoulders. As soon As I got to the room I hooked up the gamecube to the television and put it on the bottom shelf of the thing the television was on and took out all the Lego star wars games, paper Mario, Mario party 5, Tony Hawk pro skater 2, Tony Hawk underground 1 and 2 and the two controllers and put them next to the silver gamecube. Then I got my bag took out my riding jeans with clothes spilling everywhere I tore off my shorts and put on my jeans put every thing on my bed and ran to the stables.5

"Where's the fire Tues?" Kenneth asked after I almost knocked him down.6

"I'm going to the stables! DUH!" I said pointing to the left where Kenneth just came from.7

"OKAY... Did you bring my gamecube or yours?" Kenneth asked me before I could take off for the stables again.8

"Mine of course!" I said "And didn't your friend bust your purple gamecube?" I added using air quotes on friend.9

"Nope," Kenneth said madder of factly" his sister busted it." he added laughing.10

"How?" I asked knowing he was lyeing.11

"She gave it, ummm, to her friend and her friend dropped it." Kenneth said12

"Okay, let me get this straight. Your friend dropped the gamecube and it broke. Right?" I said finally knowing what happened.13

"Yep! That’s what happened." Kenneth said not realizing what I said till I ran off "WAIT! IT WAS HIS SISTER!"14

"I'm going to ride Darby, don't worry I'll wait for you!" I called back to him.15

As I ran to the stables I tripped over Jackie who just stopped running in front of me. When I got up I saw that I was covered in grass and mud. Something hit my back, and it was kinda hard so I knew Kenneth had his tennis balls16

"Ken!!!" I yelled through the ball back with as much mud as possible. The two of us used the last half hour of sunlight fighting in the mud.17

"Time to wash up for supper kids!" Grandpa Charles called.18

"Be right there" Kenneth and I said running to the house. When we got there Grandpa and Grandma said we had to shower before we got to eat, we where COVERED in mud after all... that was a great week!

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  • Inkling
    June 4
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    Um. xD Hi. It's meeeeehhhhh. So. Anyway. Yeah. I liked the story (is it true? I'm slow today. ._.), but I think it'd be better if you made it a little longer and fixed some of the mistakes. Then it would be awesome and stuff. ^-^ Even though it already is. And stuff. o.o