Creepy Sixth Grader

"Bob, just shut up." muttered Ally. It was at the end of the day and people were packing back packs.1

"In your dreams," he sneered," I bet you like the sound of my voice."2

Ally wrote a little note on a sticky pad, saying.3

"I'm with Psychopath --->", the arrow pointing at Bob.4

"It's pointing at you." commented Bob.5

Ally noticed the sticky note was upside down and stuffed it in her desk, embarrassed.6

Ally returned to the book she was reading, a fantasy novel.7

Bob passed her a sticky note:"how's the book?"8

Ally was now annoyed. She noticed there was a picture of a shadow like thing in her book, she she drew a sign in it's hands:"Kill Bob."9

Ally showed it to Bob and he started laughing.10

He wrote another note to Ally. It was a picture of a hobo.11

Ally decided to erase hobo, and put Bob.12

She handed it back to Bob, and he erased something, drew some words Ally couldn't see, and passed it back.13

"Ally loves Bob."14

She replaced "love" with the word "hate" and tossed it back.15

Bob raised his hand jokingly." Mr. Brushke," he moaned quietly.16

They both giggled silently, until the teacher said," Care to tell the class what you were laughing about?"17

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"Arf! Arf!19

Bob was poking ally with a light blue dog balloon animal. A clown had come over(don't ask why, especially in sixth grade) and they had all gotten free balloon animals.20

Ally smacked it away.21

Bob said, an squeaky voice, clearly imitating the dog," I thought we had something special! We're through! I've found another!"22

And walked the dog up to Nathaniel, making it "lick" Nate.23

Both boys started laughing, and Ally joined in.24

Around a minute later, Bob pushed the little dog over to Ally's desk, again impersonating the dog," Baby come back!"25

Ally threw the dog back at Bob.26

Bob pushed it over again, once again saying," Baby come back!"27

All three people(including Nate) were laughing really hard, having the time of their lives.28

"Bob, Ally, Nate, what's so funny?" asked their teacher.29

"Nothing." said Bob, and smiled at Ally.30

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Ally was reading her book, as usual, when she felt her shoulder get squeezed.32

She looked. Bob quickly pulled his hand away.33

"Darly did it!" he accused as Daryl walked by.34

"Wasn't me!" said Daryl.35

Bob winked and returned to his math homework.36

Ew, thought Ally, grossed out a boy squeezed her shoulder, though it was flattering to have someone crushing on her.37

THE END

Author notes

Names have been changed.
if you're wondering, it's both love and hate. The real Bob can be such an idiot sometimes, but he can be funny. He also has a crush on me.
Also, the book was Inkdeath which I really did write on.

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  • Carina.J.LR
    May 14

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    AHAHA, I have sooo many boys that do that Nice story but you should try and look out for careless errors

    Thanks for entering and goodluck!!

    -Carina >smiles<


  • the back row
    May 14
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    Ha, this was very cute, although there could have been a little more detail.

  • mikael
    April 23

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    My favorite part:

    Gotta be the mention of my favorite series: Inkheart/spell/death. If anyone hasn't read these books, you should. And boys are silly, how hard is it to give us chocolate and say 'I like you.'


  • Firequeenlover
    April 19
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    not

    not as great as others but it is cool

    beginning: 3, language: 1, plot: 3, ending: 1, dialog: 2, characters: 5.


  • tallblondie gold member
    April 19

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    Hang on to memories like this - because when as you get older, love and hate will never be this simple. It's cute, and the way you've recounted it is quite clear - and you've shown the reader what love is - by how you perceive it at the moment.

    Thank you for your entry in One in Six Billion: Love and Hate


  • Kyndal Laran
    April 17
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    hahaha yea, ive had guys like that with me. i hate it but i love it!


  • CallMeWhenUrRich
    April 17

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    Lol.
    I like it.
    But then again, I always did like the whole "high school romance" kind of theme.
    Great job.

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