Some help with plotting (For contest)

For a rough draft for plotting out your story. I guess that would be option 1.1

Just ideas for the order can switch it up, its not my story its yours. Have fun with the ideas I gave2

Prologue: The fight between her betrothed and Trinity, we will call him Erick for now. Maybe begin it with Erick trying to take control over her or doing something which is the reason Trinity hates him so much.3

Chapter 1: Trinity father gets evolved in the fight; then soon after banishes her. Although, he is the one that gives her the pendent without Erik knowing about it. Erik does one last thing to make her life a piece of hell before she leaves the sea to camp.4

Chapter 2: The beginning of Music camp; how everything is different for her now that she's on land. Trinity tries to make the best of it trying not to give her real identity away. She meets the boy she will soon fall in love with. We will call him Felix for now. 5

Chapter 3: Trinity tries the Siren call on Felix and to her surprise it has no effect on him. She grows curious of him, but growing a crush on him at the same time. Trinity walks on the beach every day wishing to go back home soon.6

Chapter 4: New years eve at the beach; Felix follows Trinity to the beach. Trying to gain the courage to speak to her since he as watched her many nights pacing the beach. He knows she's different but isn't quite sure what she is quite yet. Felix longs to be with her, and knows he must talk to her tonight if he is ever going to talk to her. Felix's demon side wants to take over when he is around her but he fights it off as much as he can.7

Chapter 5: They meet every night on the beach; they feel comfortable around each other without even knowing the real reason of why they both do. Slowly falling for each other not realizing the problems it will cause for the both of them. 8

Chapter 6: Trinity realizes her pendent has gone missing. While searching for it, Felix finally figures out who she really is. Knowing this would destroy everything if Trinity finds out what he is or finds out that he knows that she's a mermaid. He makes a plan to tell her before she finds out and tells her the truth about himself.9

Chapter 7: Beach scene where Felix tells Trinity everything. Trinity tells him she would rather be with him then make home with her father and Erick. 10

Chapter 8(If you want): Trinity's father who has been some what keeping an eye on her throws a fit when he finds out that she doesn't want to return home and would rather be with a demon than her own kind. The second fight scene where the father almost destroys a good part of the land, trying to save Trinity who doesn't want to be saved. Felix's father also gets evolved with the fight trying to protect his son. Then an arrangement is made so Trinity and Felix can live together.11

I hope that helps you a little bit.

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  • Violette silver member
    May 31

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    This is cool that you're helping someone else out. I gave the concept a stab myself not too long ago. It's fun to give other people a chance to write using your unwanted or extra ideas. This was great!

  • This is very good! I wish I could be so organized about my plot lines and know where I'm going with my stories. I can see why you won.


  • MJs-Angel
    May 16
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    Hmm...for taking something from another persons plotline...you have some amazing ideas!


  • Rose Hathaway
    April 16

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    Very nice. I like your take on the story, although I probablly wouldn't have Felix as a demon because that sounds so familliar to Twilight. Your wording is very helpful and is probablly how the story will go. But of course before I can start writing I will need to plan a detialed chapter layout of what will happen. This was good and gave me an idea of how things in the story could flow. Thanks for entering!


    • GrimDeath
      April 16
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      Your welcome. I was just throwing things out there. Let me know when you write the story I would love to read how it turns out. Thank you for the trophy.

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