4th of july

This was written on the fith of july, because we stayed up too late on the fourth.1

I am currently looking down at my shirt, which has a hole burned into it above the navel.2

Yes, a hole.3

BURNT.4

this story will be continued, but its late tonight.5

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  • September 27, 2005
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    I can't believe you actually wrote a story about that night. I love the humorous storytelling. It's like reliving it all over again, lol.


  • July 19, 2005
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    ha! very good, i love the sense of humor.. you better continue this cause its really funny so far... keep it up


  • July 5, 2005
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    I can already tell that this will definately be something interesting to read....that is IF this story actually is continuted =)


  • Co-Co-Cola
    July 5, 2005
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    ...?
    How did you burn your-

    forget it..