The Final Strike: Chapter Two: No Way

The Recade had a huge army like they had this planned for years. If you killed one, three would come to take his place. The weapons they were using were state of the art. You couldn’t get close enough to kill them with a sword. Blood stained the grass. Blade wasn’t ready for this. But, Fayt noticed something. Recade was hiding something. Fayt was getting nervous and stated to pace. Chaos was losing the fight. 1

Chaos was shocked again. Something was pushing them back. Blade entered the fight with no ones permission. His secret came out. He is no ordinary Chaos prince. He has powers that are unbelievable. His sword turned blacked and he was changing. His true form was coming out. He could take the whole army himself.2

Recade’s weapon was visible. Blade attacked it with full force. The sky turned black and Fayt was happy at his son’s abilities. Chaos might win this war after all. As long as Blade is living, Chaos has a slim chance.3

The weapon fired, aimed at Blade. His only sword broke in three. Now, Blade was furious. Beamed of unholy light beamed out of Blade destroying everything in his path. Including Recade’s ultimate weapon. Well, there goes there win right? Exactly.4

Blade is knocked out. The powers that awoke are now sleeping but will come back even stronger. Fayt is amazed that a boy of his age did so much damage. 5

Blade hasn’t recovered from that battle and it has been 3 days. Fayt is a wreck and the Kingdom can’t take one more surprise attack. Chaos received major damage. It will take centuries to repair bad to one hundred percent. Fires are blazing going from building to building. People bodies are laying in the street. Blood flooded everywhere. 6

There is an item where the battle took place. A strange object. Something has never been seen before. A ancient relic. More like staff. One chosen can have it. The chosen one has died though so people think that the staff is useless. And so it is.7

The sky is still black. Afternoon has come. He must still be in that helled form. The people that do not no of his form are starting to be worried. Everyone is thinking that rain season isn’t here yet. They think it is smoked from the Recade attack. The fire is almost out too. Only a few people no of his true form and what he was alive for. Fayt can not tell is citizens. He thinks they should not no until it is certain that they can win this war and that Blade’s form gets stronger. 8

Fayt is trying to find Blade’s second sword. He wants it to be stronger thicker and 3xs better then the first. He is having trouble and fears that he might have to leave Chaos to go find it. That might be a mistake. Now that Blade is in the condition that he is, Recade might launch another massive attack. Fayt will leave and hope that Chaos is still there when he comes back.9

Author notes

Chapter two. yay two peole saw the first one when i started to right this one. They didn't comment so. I contuined neway.
Still tell me if it is ne good

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  • EmsandAbs
    July 9, 2005
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    Wow greta story of to chapter 3 i'll comment moreo n there
    -emz....How could this happen to me i made some mistakes....-Simpole plan


  • Gentle Android
    July 8, 2005
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    The articulation and spelling is at a really low par in this installment, which was confusing.
    Also, you keep mixing tense.


  • Sealight
    July 7, 2005
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    It's really cool. Write more!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm dying to know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!


  • July 5, 2005
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    Sooooo interesting, where do you get your ideas?