hospitals can be scary

I was in the hospital, I know what it is like.1

People doing uncomfortable tests on you, any time of the day or night.2

Parents can't always be with you, they need their sleep too3

but I have a few ideas for you, to keep you from feeling blue.4

First think of your favorite game, than close your eyes really tight5

pretend you are playing with your friends of family, without getting in a fight.6

Than think of your favorite animal, and imagine playing with one7

in a sunny happy spot, you are having so much fun!8

When the nurses come and try to do tests here is what you do,9

close your eyes and think of a place, you would want to be if you were blue.10

You might think of a beach. Or a park or a city like Rome.11

Or perhaps you think of a family's house, or somewhere you consider home.12

Think about a starry sky, or fairies in the woods.13

Think of castles or rocket ships, I really think you should.14

If you dream of happy things, the hospital won't be as bad,15

if you think and dream of beauty, you won't feel so sad.

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  • trekkergirl
    April 24

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    This is very nice in an innocent way. Yes, indeed hospitals can definitely be a scarey place... I know I work at one. I did like this one though. Thanks for sharing it with us. And thanks for enteirng it into my contest.


  • Siibillam
    April 15

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    Aw, this was cool. I'm a bit stupid though, it took me like half the story to realise it rhymed... hehe
    If I can say one thing though, it's perhaps make your text a bit easier to read? Had to sort of tilt my screen upwards a bit to read it properly. Pedanticity over, I think it was very good