Despite the pity Gwen felt as she looked down at her husband's large, calloused hands laying uselessly across his unmoving chest, she had an elated sense of freedom from the knowledge that he was finally dead and no one suspected a thing.
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More. More. More. I would like to ready more of this. I chose this as the piece to belatedly hoodwink, since most of your pieces are short. I hope you write more of this. I am hooked.


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Kind of a long sentence, but it worked.
Laying should by lying
Good job and thanks for entering…this seemed like the beginning of a very interesting story.
Rian

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Again, you've got me hook, line and sinker. Patiently awaiting the first chapter.........


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! This sounds like a great start to an epic mystery! Hope to read the actual story that goes along with it!
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Well, Claudia, you have definitely 'hooked' me! I would love to read more of this!!!


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