this blank feeling...

i lay here1

staring at the blank celing2

nothing wrong3

nothing right4

i just feel plain, alright5

yesterday was the worst day i have ever had6

but today i am in between7

and tomorrow8

i will be the gladest of the glad9

so i stay here10

i don't make a sound11

a smile at what may happen12

and i hear the sound of fireworks13

hitting the ground14

i do not know15

but i do not wish16

i am just living17

each day as others18

would have it19

so as i am here20

i want you to know21

that nothing has changed 22

i still love you so23

this blank feeling...24

Author notes

"May the Force be With You" YIPPY HORRAY!!!

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  • CodeNameCassie
    July 15, 2005
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    Thanks for your enthusiasm with the May the Force be with you...as a true Star Wars fan, I truly appreciate it.

    Thanks for submitting an entry...I really enjoyed reading your poem...I am definitely going to look into your other works. Thanks for gracing my contest with your beautiful writing!!

    Cassie

  • sloanzee
    July 7, 2005
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    great poem, your a great poet

  • Teague
    July 7, 2005
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    great poem...its like your in between worlds...its kinda like me. the last line is perfect because it is you title which reinforces what the poem is about and i also do this because it develops your technique even if u didnt know u were doing it...haha anyways nice poem ~ Teague~ (contest entrant)