VArsity CHapter 2

When they were in the car they talked and reliazed that they had fallen for each other.1

That was the night Rachel had gotten her first kiss. And she knew that from then everything had seemed ok with her.2

As she walked to the pool because it wass getting cold outside.3

She Thought about Homecoming. She knew she would have to get all these things and that JR would except her to actualyl do it that time. She knew that she wasnt ready but she would be ready when it came.4

Whe nshe got to the pool the atmosphere was great. How she loved the smeel and the way the coaches always seemed to be screaming and telling then what to do next. She loved it. She loved JR. 5

When it was over and she sat by the guys loocker room waiting for Jr. She hated that part because all the guys walked out and looked at her. 6

Whe nhe finally came out he grabbed her and played like he was going to drop her in the pool. She loved the way he could just pick her up. She felt liek she was going to be dropepd in there.7

After Jr had had his fun they walked out. She loved the way he smelled like chlorine and the way he put his arm around her and nothing could harm her. She looked at his Deep green eyes and they were beutiful.8

they got to his car and he drove her home. about a couple of blocks he stopped and hebrought her close to him and satrted kissing her. She loved his kisses. Then he started up her shirt. for the first time she didnt mind him doing that. Then when hshe saw the clocked she realized she had to get home. 9

"jr i have to get home" she said between kisses.10

"elly but i-i..i whatever ok lest go' he called her elly for some weird reaso she didnt even know11

"ok well i'm walking you to your door" he said and she was glad.12

When they were there he satrted kissig her again and the nher sister came out and had to pull her in or ese the parents migth find out.13

"bye el" he  said14

And that was one of the last normal days they had because everything ssatred to chnage15

Author notes

For all og you out there i dont know when homecoming is supposed to be.Jr (John richard). I dont do erotica.

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  • EmsandAbs
    August 9, 2005
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    thnaks for the comment sis
    -pinky
    Edited on Aug 09, 8:43 p.m. because 'I had a brain fart????'.

  • EmsandAbs
    August 9, 2005
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    thnaks for the comment.....thanks
    -Pinky


  • Manic Poet
    August 9, 2005
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    Great Write

    That's the thing with relationships...They never stay the same and you have to be careful about that.
    And spell check isn't accurate at all, but it makes no real difference because we got it. This was a good story and very true. Nice job lil sis

  • EmsandAbs
    July 4, 2005
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    thanks for the comment and i will use spellcheck
    emz


  • stolen fairy
    July 4, 2005
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    i found it hard to read because of the constant spelling errors... it would be a good idea to use the spellcheck. this will help you convey your ideas much better.
    ~tara
    Edited on Jul 04, 8:53 p.m. because ''.

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