She knew it was risky, but she needed to see him. A half an hour would be enough time. If it wasn't, she would have to make a decision. 1
Knocking on the door, her heart was beating harder. When he opened it, she stepped in quickly, and starting kissing him hungrily.2
He pinned her against the now shut door, his hands sliding up into her hair. Gently, he pulled her head to one side, and started to taste her neck. His teeth nipped at her skin, leaving little indents. All the while, her hands were tearing at his clothes, then hers, not wanting to waste a single second. Pressing kisses on his shoulders, then down his chest, she pushed him away from her. As he backed up, she dropped down to her knees and took his member into her mouth. She had never liked to this before, but she knew she could trust him, and she loved how he would moan. 3
As a moan escaped him now, she felt a little trill of pleasure course down her spine. She used her tongue to along the line that went up the underside of his cock. As her mouth got to the top, she did a little vibration with her tongue. He roughly pulled her up at that, and took her to the bed. Instead of laying her down, he bent her over the bed. It was just high enough to support her, if her knees gave out during an orgasm. 4
He knelt down behind her, and gently pulled her nether lips apart. Her breath caught as he started to taste her. She felt something else slipping inside, and gasped as he started to move his finger in and out. Feeling her start to shake as she neared orgasm, he stood up slowly and pushed his swollen cock into her hot hole. Feeling her muscles clutching at him, he started to drive into her deep and fast.5
Holding onto her hip with one hand, he reached for her hair. Knowing it would put her over the edge, her pulled her head up. She could now watch everything in the mirror. Her flushed face was twisted with passion, as she could feel him start to swell. Her body was so attuned to his, she could feel when he was about to cum. 6
"Give it to me. I want to feel every last drop coming out", she panted.7
He let out a low groan as he started to explode deep within her. Grabbing her hips tightly, he held himself in her as her orgasm became powerful. Feeling her body milking every last drop out, his kept twitching in response. Her body responded in kind and made her collapse on the bed as another orgasm quivered through her.8
Curling up to her back, he whispered the words she needed to hear. He knew she would have to leave, and go back to home. He wanted to make sure she knew she was wanted here. He felt it would only be a matter of time before she wouldn't have to leave him anymore...9
But that's another story..10
Author notes
Lets just say, this isn't just my imagination. I chose option 4.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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Thanks for having the contest.. I am trying to not be so shy about my erotica.. Athena
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Any who tangle with one such as you will be burned as if held by the sun. This is real on so many levels. I have to thank you for sharing this piece of your life with us. Thank you for entering the contest.
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Seductive
Very good story! it was very intense and you painted a good picture in my head of what was going on and the characters were feeling. Keep writing and check out some of my works! -
Lust, Love and yearning!! I loved this, it was warming as well as deeply erotic! keep up the great work! hope to read more soon..
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She had never liked to this before,
i think you're missing a few words or word there.
watch your verb tenses! some drift from past to present and makes for awkward flow. read this out loud and you'll hear what I'm on about.
but minor edits aside this was thrilling, moving and now i have to get a towel -
fantastic
Wow this was really fantastic. I cant wait for the next story. It was very interesting im very curious about why she cant stay perhaps its an affair. This was really great. Well Best of luck Jane. -
Thank you!! I have an interest in doing more.. but have this bad habit of starting it, then not finishing.. Bleh.. Athena
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well written erotica. probably should have gotten a trophy (but dp and horus always beat you out!) I enjoyed the realism of the girl's feelings, and the explicitness of your descriptions...straight-forward, vivid, but not crass. you're a skilled story teller.
~travis
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You really really painted an image or should I say created a movie that was very vivid. You did an awesome job..you put just enough detail into the story to intrique to read further and never over did it. I dont usually read too many erotic writes but I must say this is the best so far that I have read in this category. Good luck in the contest
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Cant wait to read what happens to "Her" in the next "chapter" lol
great write...Loved the idea of comfort being found in desirable lust...great details...please let me know when the next part is done...
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Oh for the times when we have that other person around that makes us feel this way... the sex is great the feelings are there and all that is in the way.... a partner grumbles I understand this one. Make sure you write the next part I loved this
Shari
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I can't wait for the other story either.. It's a great write. I really liked it
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Can't wait for the "other story". Great write.
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When I do, I'll let you know.. It's a work in progress, so to speak..
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ahh, so sincere, a woman seeking comfort in another mans lustful and long arms, aww atleast thats what im picking up, nice job, finish the story and Id be glad to comment more
Sh0rt XxX
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