Anybody would have suspected that the town of Birch Tree, Maryland, was an ordinary city. After all, it had roads, gas stations, a mall, fast-food restaurants, and lots to do. But this town had one characteristic that set it apart from the other towns in Maryland: this town gave birth to a superhero.1
Since the town of Birch Tree was kind of small, everyone knew each other. Birch Tree was a tight-knit community. And there was one teenager in the town that everyone knew: Nathan Parker. Nathan Parker was not your typical teenager. In fact, Nathan was like no other teenager. He had a deep love for music unmatched by anyone in the town. His love for music began when his parents bought him a mini-keyboard at the age of two. Next, he took up piano at the age of four.2
For the next few years, he continued to grow and excel at music. When his Bar Mitzvah came around, he received a handsome, dark red, electric guitar! Soon afterwards, he formed a band called The Aliens, with three other members. I don't need to tell stories about Nathan's love for music any longer, you all understand that he loved music. 3
You're probably wondering how he became The Rocker, a world-renowned superhero. Well, dear readers, I am about to tell you.4
Author notes
The Rocker is a superhero I made up a few months ago. I know this part is kind of boring, but I think it'll get better.
What did you think? Please comment!
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This is the epilogue. The epilogue is the end so how can there be more. You are thinking of a prologue maybe?? Anyway, nice writing. Keep it up. (love The Mysterious House)
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Nice way to start a story! *gives you a thumbs up* On the the first chapter!
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This is a great write! An excellent story, you really like music.
I love reading about made up characters and imaginary heros, I think its magic how you believe in them. They make you grow.
This is great!
Lady anairO
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My pleasure, bro.
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Well, you're really good at writing poems. I have writer's block in terms of poetry right now. Thanx for the comment. They are always appreciated!
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Evan, a good start on a very interesting story. Keep writing. Jim
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VERY GOOD
Good story, bro. You have a great talent for storywriting.
I wish I did too. You make me jealous. lol.
Great job, buddy.
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