Friday Night [Monologue]

[Young girl pacing the stage, showing no emotion at all. Then she turns to the auidence.]1

[In a monotone voice.] 2

It was a Friday night. I'd just come home from school, it was late. I'd been to my friends house. As I stepped in the door, I knew something was different about the house. My sweet welcoming home seemed to welcome something else, something... not Earthly.3

My mother was upstairs, on the phone, probally talking to one of her friends. I didnt want to bother her, so I set up my homework downstairs. 4

[Uh oh, writers block. Better write this later. ]5

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  • pozo
    April 7, 2006
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    Write more, this is far too short Nice introduction though

    overall: 3.


  • KaleidoscopicRage
    November 29, 2005
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    thats it!??! thats it!!?!? ah!!! oh well. short but its good.

  • x Loveless x
    August 4, 2005
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    -.-' She doesnt want to go upstairs, she was going to say hello to her mother, but she decided not to bother her. OkAy?

  • CedricDempNQ2
    August 4, 2005
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    But that's no reason to stop you going up quietly. Of course if go charging upstairs like an elephant, trumpeting as well, then of course it might disturb her and perhaps the neighbours as well. Whether or not they happen to be on the phone.

  • x Loveless x
    August 4, 2005
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    Because, when you go home and you open the door, dont you usually say hello to the people who are in that house? -.-'

  • CedricDempNQ2
    August 4, 2005
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    It's just that if the/your mother has the phone in her room then,assuming you go/she goes upstairs quietly,there shouldn't be any reason why she should be bothered? Not that's it's really important though of course.

  • x Loveless x
    August 4, 2005
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    She's not afraid of upsetting her mother, she just doesnt want to bother her when she's on the phone. I dont want some one bugging me when I'm talking to my friends.

    And no, its not a mini-monologue, its not finished.

    Yes, her mother has the phone in her room. Whats your point?

    Diva ~

  • CedricDempNQ2
    August 4, 2005
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    Room for improvement.

    More of a mini-monologue this Raven and why should she be afraid of upsetting her mother? Surely her mother doesn't have the phone upstairs unless it's in her room.


  • powerslave
    July 14, 2005
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    Writers block eh I remember, back in my theatrical days (so when I was two or so), I had to read a two page monologue at the start of a play Dear lord that was hard! So please, if you add to this, and incase it's ever published, don't go and make it too long Anyway, it was great. Well done

  • x Loveless x
    July 3, 2005
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    Great Comment!!

    Hehe, maybe I'll finish it with...
    "Then I came to a peice of Literacy homework. Damn, I hate Literacy. So I began to write in my Diary. And I wrote all of this. And then I was bored. I had no idea what else to write. I had... WRITERS BLOCK!!"
    Lolz. That would be stupid.
    Also, I wanted to ask you if you go on Habbohote.co.uk . I've just started, it seems cool.
    Moi Moi xx XP


  • Necromancer Kitten
    July 2, 2005
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    NOT WRITERS BLOCK!!!! must go kill writers block. lol. but soo far I like this you should really continue it. You'dbe really good at writing a play. ^^ Well i want to read more!!! hurry up and write!!!

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