Every life has a meaning, Or a density. The thought that only one was chosen to wield the sword that will be possessed. A dark and unholy world the will try to be victories to a civilized and clean world. Under the rule of one dark god and the child to the heir to a dark kingdom. The sword the has the ability to turn anything dark and bad. This child has a never ending quest to fulfill his density,1
A 1000 year war is being fought be two uncommon kingdoms. The dark one has brutal strength with excellent fighting knowledge. While the civilized one has great technology and smarts. The two kingdoms are in a stalemate. But, they each have there own secret weapon. The dark kingdom well know as “Chaos” has a boy with a name of Blade. The civilized kingdom’s name is “Recade” and it has a massive weapon the has capabilities like no other ever seen before. It could end the war with one shot.2
Now they are taking a break. The battles have ended for this year but will continue next spring. Blade has now turned 5 and is now able to train for the next battles. His swordsman, Fayt, the God of Chaos, is going to teach him everything he knows for one year. Fayt is still deciding whether he wants to let Blade in the first battles for next year or not. He will wait to see how much Blade improves to decide. 3
When not training, Blade likes to run around the castle and harass the guards and peasants. Fayt gets many complains but laughs every single time and says “I knew it. That boy is made to fight for this kingdom.” His father knows something about Blade that no one else knows. But, Fayt doesn't’t know much about. Blade is unaware of this. Fayt thinks that this gift is the secret to them winning.4
The training goes on and Fayt see much improvement. But, Blade has trouble on the simple techniques and has no trouble learning the more complex ones. The god is astonished by his learning abilities. Blade will learn more basic techniques after all of the complex ones. 5
Then, something unexpected happened next that shocked the whole kingdom. Recade attacks. It destroyed one third of Chaos. Blade isn’t ready for this battle. Fayt hoped that this won’t end the war. If it did Destroyer would be just another part of Recade.6
Author notes
Hey I hope u like this. it is my first story. Remember it is only chapter one. so if u like tell me and i will make chapter two. AND IF U DON'T LIKE IT PLZ PLZ TELL ME!!!!!!
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Comments
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Intersting i love it. Of to read more of the chapters
-emz.Takes my pain away its a lie a kiss with opnede eyes-jimmy eat world -
Hehe, I'm sorry, but you wrote "density" instead of "destiny" twice at the start.
Alright, your first paragraph didn't make much sense, you should definately work on that.
I'm trying to comphrend why you're writing in third person over such a huge amount of area to cover.
Ah well, going to read two and three now.
-Vasquine. -
GREAT JOB!
Ive never heared somthing this interesting.

