The Ideal Girl

In her ideal world1

A picture perfect girl2

She had good grades3

A big wide smile4

I remember because it kept me laughing for a while5

Almost like an ideal child6

But behind closed doors7

And in locked up drawers8

A different world lay --9

full of --10

Horrers11

Sealed secrets of abuse12

A child forever lost13

Who had no chance but to choose14

A meeting with death15

And risk to lose16

Her very life17

Her perfect world18

Give it all up19

Just to break free20

Of lies and naked photoes21

Hidden where no one could see22

Her parents walked in23

And were shocked to find24

Their daughter locked up in a room25

The chamber that hid her secrets26

And sealed her doom27

Broke down the door28

And found a rope29

Just long enough to choke30

The ideal girl31

Hanging from the ceiling32

At last her silence33

Broke34

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  • petrichor
    July 3, 2005
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    Wow this is amazing. If you read this out aloud I would be speechless. My favourite line was 'Who had no chance but to choose A meeting with death' This poem is really good well done.