NOTE: I hope my write, doesn't offend anyone..My write, was written with 1
MY BELIEFS ONLY! Not to judge, others..This, would be right for me..Only my opinion..I don't judge, peoples choice...I only judge ,what is right for me.. I feel like I was suppose to write, this write, I felt as If I had help, writing it from somewhere deep inside my soul..So ,I continued to write this story..{{{Hugs }}}2
Mama,I want to touch your heart. Can you feel me? I'm inside 3
you and you can't hear me. Do you know how much you mean to 4
me? I'm a part of you but yet, you want to abort me. Oh,why 5
do you have to end me? I'll never get the chance to make you 6
proud ,of me. Mama, I'm just asking for a chance to live my 7
life.8
Don't let them tell you, I can't feel anything. How, do they 9
know I can't? Are they sure I'm not anything yet? Do you 10
know Mama,things are really starting to develop on me? My11
eyes, are starting to grow. My ears, are starting to develop. 12
I can hear..So they must be. I heard you loud, and clear what13
you said today. You ,said I don't want this baby that grows 14
inside me. This, baby is a bad mistake. Mama ,you said I was a 15
bad mistake you made.16
Now, that is really sad Mama, I'm no mistake. Now ,that really17
makes me mad! How ,can a living person who is breathing and 18
so much alive be a bad mistake? I'm a gift Mama, from God to 19
you. I'm not a mistake. I, wish I could get through to you.20
I see you made up your mind Mama. You're ,laying on this 21
cold table..I heard your nurse say the doctor will be right 22
in. Mommmmm, I'm really scared. I ,wish you could have seen 23
me. Maybe, you would have changed your mind. I hold nothing 24
against you Mama, It's your right. God, knows I have no say 25
over my own life. Its, all right Mom. Bye, Mama. I'm sorry I 26
was your bad mistake. I'm sorry, I became your problem since 27
the very first day.28
Wait!!! What, are you doing Mom? Your, getting off this cold, 29
awful table. I hear you. Mama, you are crying. Who, is the 30
Doctor you're talking to? I heard what you said Mama. You 31
said, 'Doctor I just cant. I don't know how to explain it 32
to you. I'm sorry, I wasted your time but this just can't be. 33
I, love this baby inside of me. My, baby and I we'll be fine 34
will make it. You will see. I'm smiling inside. My Mama, 35
really does love me. 36
Betty Rickard37
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Dear Samantha,
You, are so welcome for the comment, I made on your poem..I meant it...Thank you, for your wonderful comment, you just gave me on my write..Your, beliefs are mine also..When, I wrote this write I was going to just rip it up..Because I didn't want people to think I was trying to hurt them ,and make them feel guilty..I, stopped the write..But, when I went to bed, It would keep me up night, after night just like it was haunting me..So, one night I got up and came down to the computer, an finished it..I knew in my heart, I just had to finish this write..I truthfully believe, my pen was in God's hand ..I believe if my write saves even one baby, anything ,and everything I ever wrote, would be so worth it for me ..It, would be all I needed to accomplish, in my writings..Thank you, with all my heart..For your kind comment on this write..
God, bless you always,
Betty
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Dear Molly,
IM so happy ,that it was your choice to keep your, child ..Wow, your right my write sounds like you..As, for your first husband, Im glad you've made the choice you have..God, bless you, and your son always..Wait, I think God, has already blessed you!, Thank you, for your wonderful , comment ..I do appreciate it so much..
Be blessed always,
Betty -
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Betty,
My name is Samantha and first off I must greatly thank you for the sweet comment you left with regards to my latest poem. And thank you so much for all of the best wishes! I read your poem and this made me get teary eyed. You depicted so well what choices a mother goes through especially in crazy circumstances whether to choose life or to choose abortion. Personally, I disagree with abortion completely because deep down I feel "if you're not ready for the consquences then don't have sex." BUT if in a case of rape or something of that sort I do understand that the girl will be extremely scared and won't know what to do which in that case I say you should give the child up for adoption. Or if you're not ready for a baby but you're pregnant give the child up for adoption. That's probably the greatest gift a mother could give to her kid in that circumstance. The child would get raised in a loving family that the mother would have a say about, and she can check in on the child as much as she wants. You did an amazing piece here Betty! Truely, amazing. <3 Sam -
This was a wonderful wonderful write. You wrote with emotion and feeling that came through. I really liked. It reminded me of myself, my first husband wanted me to abort our child or he would leave me, so I made the appointment, but in the end could not go through with it, so I told him to leave and kept my baby, who know is 21 years old and I don't know life without my son. How could have I actually thought of killing him. Very nice work. The lord has us in his hands...Molly
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Songbirde,
Thank you ,so much..What a nice comment..I truly, appreciate
that you took the time, to make a comment to me..Thank you..
Be blessed,
Betty -
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WOW. This is so good. It really came from your heart and I could tell taht right away. It almost made me cry! -
Dear StevenHoward,
Thank you ,for your wonderful comment..Your, right!.. I'm ,taking my apology back..This write, came from my heart, and soul..It is my heartfelt, feelings on this subject..I appreciate your comment, so much..Thank you, for It..I appreciate you, setting me straight, on my feelings..Your, absolutely right I should never apologize for who, I am..{{{Thank you }}}} I'm so happy, that you have your son and he is so loved ,by you two..God bless, you and your family always..
Your, comment really made my day..
God bless,
Betty -
This is a powerful write. Please don't apologize for your writing. People lead us to believe today that our beliefs are separate from who we are, but your beliefs define who you are and what you'll do. For that, you owe nobody an apology. If someone is offended, the problem is theirs and not yours.
Personally, I have a great deal of respect for the women who choose life for their babies, and I make no apology for my thoughts on that. I have a son because another woman decided do give him life, and give him us as his family. I'm grateful to her, and we really love our son.
Speaking from a literary standpoint, I thought you were well structured, and conveyed the emotion from the standpoint of the one who cannot speak. Very well done. Don't apologize for it.
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