senerio one

I know you can see me . . .  where you are hiding . . . you watch me a lot – I do know your there . . . So watch me . . . watch me touch myself, while I’m lying back on my bed . . . watch me as I run my fingers through my hair . . . and slowly run my fingertips down my throat and over my breasts, as my hands cup them gently . . . 1

I arch my back – just a little , and my hands slowly slide over my stomach . . . and I tickle myself with the tips of my fingers over my abdomen . . . I like the way my skin makes the smallest tingling sensation . . . You watch my hands slide back over my ribs and circle my breasts , I can feel your eyes – almost as though they are speaking to me . . . 2

I love to trail my fingers under my breasts, I’m so very sensitive there and you watch my body begin to respond . . . watch me .. watch me lift my hand to my mouth, a fingertip slowly slides over my lower lip as if its waiting for an invitation inside, and I open my mouth , just a little , to feel the heat within and then my tongue  slowly circles the tip of my finger and you watch it slide , ever so slowly in and out my mouth . . . I know your there , I know your watching me 3

Watch me  . . . as I slide my fingers down over my breasts, lightly pinching my nipples and then … not so lightly .. I rub my palm over them , I love the feel of my nipples, their hardness against my palm … you watch me wet my fingers again , as I tease myself a little , the feeling of the wetness and the air work together in ways that make them harder …4

I arch my back into the pillows, as my thumbs rock back and forth sending a soft heat inside my body . . . my body begins to relax under my touch and unconsciously move with the feelings inside … my hands slide down my stomach to my hips and my thighs open … just a little … as I run my fingertips from my hips to my knees and then softly, so softly they slide up the inside … my body opening to my touch … 5

Watch me … watch me give myself pleasure, my fingertips trail between my thighs, slowly exploring – one hand teases a breast, while the other finds its nectar within … my fingertips stroke my clit , just a little .. feeling it harden under my touch, sending heat through my body, anticipating more … and my body begins to move , arching my hips as my hands touch and tease with more pressure … 6

You can smell my nectar, I know you can and I can feel your eyes follow my hand as I taste, taste that sweet nectar … watch me … watch me as I slide my fingers inside me to feel the heat and wetness .. you know the feeling of my nectar on my clit makes the sensations multiply, I don’t know what happens but the feeling of my nectar sliding over my clit is so, so soft and smooth and it intensifies the heat inside my body , like a wave of deep, deep heat that then flushes over my skin … I love that feeling so much I slide my fingers into myself over and over again .., teasing my clit with its wetness as my body moves and let myself go with the feelings and moan again and again … I really like to let myself go when I give myself pleasure and you can see it , cant you ……. 7

My body is flushed with heat and my skin prickles wanting release … as tease and stroke my clit faster and harder, my body responding to the waves of feeling rising in my body … dipping my fingers inside I feel the wetness increasing and the sensitivity is heightened everywhere …. And I stroke my clit faster feeling my insides begin to contract with a deep, deep intensity .. radiating heat throughout my body, wave upon wave of pulsating heat tightening and expanding my insides to a climatic release …8

You watch me as my body slows.. my fingertips softly touch as the contracting deep inside me slows down … the wetness between my legs on my fingers trapped between my thighs as I roll onto my side , floating inside …9

As I bring my fingertips to my mouth to taste … I look right into your eyes …….10

Author notes

i hope this doesnt offend anyone ..i did ask about wording . i just hope its still ok ... i gues thing is i like it i do like true erotic stories, so you see them in your mind . feel them inside ....

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  • glispa
    October 23, 2005
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    hahaah thankyou , please feel free to read senerios 2,3 and 4

  • metrophobiac
    October 23, 2005
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    SMOKING!!! Wow, I just LOVE it, I for one...mmm what do i say, THIS is, mmmm well, well done! Whew. I have to recover from this one.. thanks for sharing! -b

  • glispa
    October 23, 2005
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    thankyou so much for reading and enjoying

  • HopelessScribbles
    August 28, 2005
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    nice write

    well written sensual? poem for the naked eye ..lol

  • Mr Coffee
    August 28, 2005
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    That was very...interesting reading, and arousing, if I may say that. Well done as far as that being your intent.

  • glispa
    August 28, 2005
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    we are all kinds of wacky and sometimes you dont need anothers physical imput

  • buffytheparrotslaye
    August 28, 2005
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    Sensuouly Erotic!

    There is nothing offensive in the art of pleasuring oneself.Poetry embraces feeling,emotion and sensations of warm human beings.The images are reotic and the sensations run deep.Voyeurism is very sexy and all you describe is adult,alive and vibrant!


  • destructiaplecuta
    August 28, 2005
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    I love the use of a voyeuristic POV in this piece. Very . . arrousing to say the least.


  • PassionsGold
    August 28, 2005
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    very good write....i may be young and a women myself but that was great. The discription was wonderful and the ending with him watching right there was unexpected. Very nice expression of...many many things lol Keep doing it!...was nice to see something other than sappy love! THANKX!

  • LustNPleasure
    August 27, 2005
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    Excellent

    Very descriptive. I felt as if I was right there watching o.O Anyways very good writing. Keep it up.


  • mikesbooty
    August 27, 2005
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    It didn't take that long to read. I thought it was a beautiful piece! It was a must read. Thanks for sharing!

  • grannyeri
    August 27, 2005
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    A very good description of a very good session of masturbation. Not quite what I expected, but read it to the end. I am sure you write other things to, so will check those out sometime. Keep writing,


  • hot babe30
    August 27, 2005
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    it took a pretty long time
    to read
    but it was worth it
    you r a talented poet!
    this is a great poem!
    good job!
    keep it ^
    much luv,
    aby

  • luvdrkchocolate
    August 27, 2005
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    I thought my poetry was kind of whacky but I think you have me beat! LOL

    Sounds like you were really having a good time... with yourself. And who ever it was, you were hoping was watching... uh yeah... sounds like they were too late...

  • Tercil
    August 27, 2005
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    To write peices like this, it has to be good. This topic is not to be exaggerated and therefore subtleties implied give an avid charm to the topic yuo require to give the reader enough imagination without holding their hand to virtually do the job themselves, given that, it is up to you tpo realise how good this is! good try!


  • Theater Of Dreams
    August 27, 2005
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    VERY EROTIC

    Written in first-person and one completely self involved as someone watches...the ultimate fantasy for me I must admit...so this was incredibly intense. GREAT job.

  • glispa
    August 27, 2005
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    every peice of poetry on here, shows somethign of the writer, it can be real , it can be from the mind, our words comes from some part of ther individual, and not all my pieces are like this, they are very wide and varied, thankyou for reading

  • glispa
    August 27, 2005
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    im sorry if this was in some way bad for you , if anything it shows what other peices on here (wih my tastes in mind) lack, it isnt crude

  • glispa
    August 27, 2005
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    what can i say , or rather what do i say - alot, if you cant find pleasure in your own body , how can you find pleasure or open fully to pleasure with another person


  • Man of Harlech
    August 27, 2005
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    What can I say? We do not know one another. Do I want to know this about you? You have a talent for description and you are able to take a leap. I'll bet you have some other poems that I would really like to read.

  • zee1
    August 27, 2005
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    Erotic piece and obviously so - can't say I see it as poetry or pretend to like it, just don't think its suitable for this place

  • RenaissanceGirl
    August 27, 2005
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    Good write..hmm, I'm not sure what else to say- lol

  • piccola
    August 27, 2005
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    I'm not into masturbation poetry ..but that's not to say it's not good; that's just to say it isn't my style ..but I was here.. I hate it when people just stand and lurk and don't at least tell you they were there..


  • ImpaleRose
    August 27, 2005
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    .....gross

  • glispa
    August 27, 2005
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  • Raazi
    August 27, 2005
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    HMMMMM......

  • glispa
    July 1, 2005
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    haha thanks for reading and commenting

  • beebee2003
    July 1, 2005
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    i fucking love it, i'm feeling my wet pussy

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