Changing every thing about me.....I will survive these timesI will go forward and write my ryhmes And if i should dieI will have left a bleeding mark behind in your eyes...I will hit a higher noteAs one with a rebelious quoteFrom the heart of a dying poet....I will dance with in her fireAnd i will admireThe beauty of her sinous desires....I will carry my crossWith this tragical lossAnd i will face this new loving realityBy changing every thing in me....1
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changing every thing about me
A poem about the change of one man
How he looks at his new reality
And what he see in here...
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if only
would be so nice to change me everything i can wish and this write well enjoyed reading i do feel many things within the words and lines had a feel for the chartacters you were developing you do have a way with words. this write keeps drawing me back into my own thoughts and desires and well they are mine not for publication...think a lot of people will relate back to this write.think you could spin a good storyline if you really put your mind to it.
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