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The students of my physics all sat mesmerized. The boys by our young petite, blonde instructor. The dipshits, whose gender I shared, by him

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He had me against the wall, his body against mine, his hand holding my wrist in an iron grip. I could feel his minty breathe against my face and as he moved even closer, I wished, strangely, I shouldn't have provoked him.

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  • Non Paix
    April 20

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    mesmerized...I hate that word...it never looks like it is spelled correctly...ugh...great word to screw up the French!! hahaha...This is an interesting piece...Dipshits is a great word...I love it hahaha....I am not really sure why you continued in author notes though...

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