Still

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The writing is just as clear as ever. She traces the outline of each letter with her fingers. The stone is rough to touch and she grazes her fingers slightly. She doesn't care. Any kind of pain just helps her to realise that maybe she isn't completely numb after all. That's the worst thing. even after all this time she still can't shed a tear. She can draw blood though. She knows that alright. The scars, new and old cuts, a few bruises line the sides of her right arm. A single slit in her left wrist shows clearly. It is new, only a day old. There are many more cuts to come. She will keep on like this forever, she must have the pain. She has considered talking to someone about it but why bother when no one could understand. They wouldn't know why she has to see the blood. She needs it to run freely down her arm, the only free thing about her, she needs it so that she can keep telling herself that it isn't her that should be lying at the bottom of that grave.3

It is a cold day but she doesn't bother to wrap her coat around her anymore. Her scarf is being tugged away by the wind but she no longer cares. She simply sits with her head against the stone and remembers.
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Author notes

Well its just the beginning of this story im writing but i though id see what every9one thought of it. And no dont panic this isnt about me or anyone in particular.

rae x x

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  • angelsmiracle
    July 2, 2005
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    i agree.. i hope you continue this too. it's got me interested already. if you write another part please let me know. great job.

  • Momentaryhappiness
    June 30, 2005
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    This is really good, I want to read more!!!
    xxx


  • Unoriginal
    June 29, 2005
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    its so sad!


  • Methadone Pretty
    June 29, 2005
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    awwww beautiful rae rae i very much hope you continue it....i am jealous of your writing dskills....i cant write songs and i can barely write stories but you kick ass my dear me wants to steal your brain you whoreus
    sings more more more how do u like it how do u like it more more more
    xxelmojonesxx


  • BlackedByPurpleRain
    June 28, 2005
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    THis is beautiful, you've just ...wow...im lost for words...post more soon....

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