With pretty purple pansies in her long and luscious locks, 1
Karly cleaned and darned her dirty, smelly socks.2
Her beautiful blue eyes bright and her teeth totally gleaming,3
Her smile was so sweet, her whole face was a-beaming.4
Karly's clover coloured dress twirled around her feet,5
Her apple coloured apron looked good enough to eat.6
Her melodious voice meandered through the meadows7
As the superbly sunny sunshine shoved away the shadows.8
Her newly laundered laundry, blew bravely in the breeze,9
Some stray seed, made her want to sneeze.10
Her not-heavy hand held some small food11
For the mother hen's chirping, cheeping brood.12
She smiled gently at the ground,13
The animated animals darting all around.14
Her happy hopefilled home, with sturdy doors thrown wide,15
Invites absolutely anyone to come and crash inside.
A contest entry
- ALLITERATION contest by Claudia Norman.
175 points, ended May 10, 15 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Lovely bit of alliteration. Upon reading it aloud I stumbled on a sentence or two with the pacing but that can easily be changed with a few words. Thank you for entering.
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