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In little corners, she paints us a rainbow 2
By typing down so much have a great day 3
Even to people she doesn’t actually know 4
She brings shiny colors in their shades of grey 5
Well thought-out comments bring laughter and joy 6
But she isn’t afraid to handle a serious matter 7
She has hundreds of poems and sonnets to enjoy 8
And really an impressive collection of the latter 9
Wielding humor and wisdom into words of art 10
She definitely has Fairy God-Mother power 11
Shooting her poems straight into the heart 12
So to many of us, she’s a beautiful flower 13
My first sonnet ever to honor a treasure, 14
MargaretG, it’s written with all of my pleasure 15
Author notes
okay, my first sonnet ever... especially written for a lady I recently learned to know...
hope you all like it
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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Awww what a wonderful poem you have here hun,So full of love,Show what a wonderful warm loving heart you truley have
I like this one alot,YOU BETTER ENTER MY CONTEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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seriously this is magical
Love ya always
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Awwwwwwwww, She's gonna love ya forever!!!!
I love sonnets, however, I will never attempt to write one.
And wow, this is your first???? AMAZING
I applaud this beautiful sonnet
Yertweetyness
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each time I get a comment of you, I can't help but feeling so... special in some kind of way all those beautiful and praising words really stun me
I can't thank you enough for the beauty of the words you write...
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A beautiful tribute to someone who sounds like they are a lovely person! I see that this is your first sonnett??? That's remarkable! I admire you for taking on a form that you've not attempted before. You've definitely done the form, and your friend an honor! You're a gifted poet, my friend! Beautiful work!
Paula
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hehe, this was so sweet and lovely of you - I'm sure it made her smile ^_^
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*smiles* This is a wonderful tribute to who, I am sure, is a wonderful person. Very nicely done, its well written, flows smoothly and is both uplifting and inspiring. I love it. Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
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I did comment here as under the name Gaze! How can you say I didn't, were you wearing your glasses, or did you forget who Gaze is? Tsk tsk, sad to get old
My dear Leander, once more I wish you all the best in this contest and thanks again for honouring Marg with this lovely poem!
Kusjes,
Mari
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Why hasn't Mari commented? Sure, she's making me do all the work
It's a lovely sentiment to my FGM and I'm sure she appreciates the sentiment. Also you've described her pretty accurately (except where she gets upset when I annoy her, lol) -
I have tried to write a sonnet many times, and I don't think they matched yours..very nicely done..especially for it to be your first and done out of honor of a sonneteer...beautiful work.
Sam
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Since I have never tried my hand at a sonnet, I give you full kudos for this wonderful piece of work. You have done well in describing the Lady Margaret, I know she will enjoy this. Best of luck in the contest.
s and ♥
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This is beautiful coming from the heart of a sincere person. It is great that you took a shot at a Sonnet just for Margaret and you did an excellent job. I would never have been able to tell it was your first. Keep up writing the Sonnets.
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Very beautiful sonnet and a wonderful tribute to Margaret G. I am sure she will be overwhelmed at all of the beauty in your words directed to her!
S~
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This is beautiful and she sounds like a beautiful woman. She must be for you to have written something so amazing for her
Shari
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Awe
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This is just like soooo beautiful......wonderful write!!!!
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Very beautiful, short and very sweet. It's rly good, quite gripping.
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Very beautiful and well written! Pretty good for a first sonnet! Keep writing, I always love sonnets I'll be excited to read others!
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a very good tribute to the person you are writing about, except im not really a big fan of sonnets, yet I was still moved enough to applaud this -
Awwwww, LeeLee. This was a very touching tribute, that was so evidently written from your swelling heart. I am sure that she was pleasntly touched with this.
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Point poor, at the moment, I cannot applaud, but I want you to know that as this is your first of many sonnets to come, you wrote not only a beautiful tribute but a beautiful, perfect sonnet!I am so very glad that I clicked on this one!
Light and love,
Linda
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Right I have actually no clue what a sonnet and a meter is
... But I'm clever enough to understand the beauty of the poem... and it is well written...
slap on your bum.
Frenchie -
This is an amazing sonnet! Especially as it is your first sonnet ever! You have done really really well with this! It is so beautiful. I love reading your works. They always inspire me to keep on writting! Thank you for sharing this with us! It is truely beautiful!
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it seemed very self praising if you ask me. thats just my opinion tho.
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this is truly beautiful. You are quite a gifted writer to write something like this. and this is your first sonnet??? I don't believe it?!
amazing. Bravo.
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This is a very sweet tribute to who sounds like an amazing writer. ^^ It makes me want to go read her stuff.
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Ohh wow, I really think that you did a great job for this being your first sonnet, I have tried in the past to write them, but I never think that they are good enough to keep and put on the site like this one is.. great job and keep up the good work, never ever stop writing, you are very talented!
Tanya -
Wow...this is great, I like how you chose to promote a person that you like/care about...great rhyme scheme, too
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Awwww...this is so sweet and moving and touching and beautiful and just...way too many things to name. It is so beautiful that you have written such an emotional and dedicated piece like this. You are truly a wonderful poet and I cannot wait to read more of your work. Nicely done
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This was quite well written but all the more important was its intentions. It's always nice when people recognize an outstanding member here on AP. Take care and God bless.
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It's lovely.
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Outstanding
Awwwww, that is so sweet! Outstanding job! Well deserving of the many applauds it has gotten, and will ever get' including my own. Keep up the great work and keep in touch! -
well actually, I also thought the meter is off
but I can't find things to edit lol
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This is indeed a lovely poem, and you have said much about her personality. I liked the mention of her favourite line
Marg is a warm and caring lady, always ready to help those who ask for her help.
About the form, I think you have the meter a little bit off, and the iambics don't work so well. I know this isn't such an easy form. I have only ONE sonnet on my page and that came after tears and blood
It's in any event a beautiful poem to a beutiful Fairy.
Thanks Leander for writing this to our contest
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I am so not better than you, you silly
thankies for the beautiful and uplifting comment
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Man, I've always known your are talented...and now...a SONNET!! WOW, Leander, you are really, really branching out in your poetic skills, my friend. And what a beautiful "word flower" for a beautiful flower woman. You could not have chosen a more perfect title and subject for this poem. A poem that reads and flows effortlessly - light and airy! I loved the light tone of this sonnet. Man, you are MUCH better than me...I think the last sonnet I wrote was in high school and THAT, my friend, was in the previous century, LOL!! Great work, Leander and such a wonderful tribute to warm this lady's heart!
~ Nicolette
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Blimey.. that was one hell of a quick response! Hehe your welcome
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thank you hunny darling
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Aww deary this is wonderful!
By the sounds of it Margaret is a wonderful person too. Your first sonnet! Blimey you are brave. i dare not attempt it myself
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs,
SPG 
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don't argue with me
I'm always right! it is true
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that's not true
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thankies hunny (and you are so much better than I am )
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This is such a wonderful tribute leander .. beautifully penned my friend .. and brilliant choice of words in this write .. best of luck to you in the contest hun
powerpuff faerie
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awe thank you so much for your beautiful and enchanting words Anna
de vriendschap is wederzijds, daar mag je zeker van zijn
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Leander, you made again a wonderful piece of art. No wonder though, for you are one of the nicest friends I have here on AP. Good luck in the contest.
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thank you for your lovely comment it's harder to get a sonnet out of the mind than I thought it would be in fact, I'd rather wanted to write a cento, but that's even harder
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Oh Leander! This is fantastic!
The lightness of your humour, your lovely choice of words, and the attention to what I have been writing make this a joy to read. The rhymes are wonderful! Of course, part of my pleasure is because you are so nice to me. Thank you very much!
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