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There's nothing worse than a broken heart1

You can feel it shatter2

Then fall apart3

The pieces they tumble4

Away from your dreams5

As your world rocks violently off it's seems6

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  • Paper.thin.paradox
    July 7

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    Brilliant...he never stopped being brilliant with his words. Broken hearts that were meant to heal but never got the change to, lie silently across the waters.


  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    April 27
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    This is complex in it's simplicity. Ty was truly a great writer.


  • Toxic Valentine
    April 4

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    It pains me to read this. It sucks, you don't want to care about the person who broke your heart but you can't help it

    This was great, good Job Ty.


  • EverRose
    April 3
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    awwwwww! I love this! Great!