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Will you greet the world 1

With a smiling face2

Or hide it away3

The shadows your light4

Will you stop to notice5

That life can be great6

Or run in the panic7

That life can bring around8

But take a deep breath9

Close your eyes10

Count to 1011

Open your eyes12

See the world again13

Is it the same?14

Is it brand new?15

A different land?16

Or a song of Hope?17

If it's different18

What will you do?19

If it's the same20

Will it be run-run-run?21

Take time to think22

Love and live well23

And may Peace be with you24

Thru Heaven or Hell

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  • Paper.thin.paradox
    July 7
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    Fancy that, this made me cry. Brilliant...


  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    April 27

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    This is so beautiful and deep. I think Ty's poems should be published. They are amazing. They can teach everyone a great lesson.


  • Hope4TheBest
    April 3

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    this is really good
    is it supposed to mean, if you miss ten seconds of living and seeing the world, it will still be the same when you open your eyes again?


    • TyShade
      April 3
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      I don't know exactly what I was getting at. I read it now and ask myself what I was thinking, it just seems like a mess of words. But actually I think it's just trying to tell people that if they gave time to think and look around life for a little while they'll be happier.


  • Toxic Valentine
    April 2
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    This is great

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