There were two sounds: The quiet pattering of rain on a distant window, and the short, staccato breathing of a wide-eyed figure...
Author notes
Probably the start of the second part to The Value of Death.
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A contest entry
- -A Contest- How well can you 'hook' me? by Reaver.
2050 points, ended April 21, 2009, 59 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Ahhh! where's the rest of it!
....lol
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Un-written.
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hmmm... well didn't really think "The Value of Death" needed a sequel, but this isn't a bad start to it.
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Well, I think it needs a sequel because it was written for it. I wrote it with doing a sequel in mind, but did it so it could stand alone.
But thanks, glad you like.
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Yeah, I could tell at the end that you had one in mind. I don't think it will be a bad thing, but like you said, it's a good story that stands on its own.
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*shudders* that does sound creepy! Good sentence though!
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Sounds creepy o.o
Eyes...wide-eyes no less...reminds me of a certain someone who wants me to open up LAWL
(counseler for those of you who dunno xD)
We call them Bampire eyes xD
ANYWAYS!
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Hehe, Bampire eyes. Sounds about right.
I'm hoping it will be creepy. When I finish writing it, or even start. xD
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ooo great imagry!
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Ta.
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Brilliant!
for entering! I really loved this. You did well at creating your theme, environment and fear. Great work!
You are a finalist,
Rian
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Thank you.
I just hope I'll be able to continue with the feel of this for the rest of the story. >.< Heh.
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