Pass me by

1

A playful blade 2

A razor charm 3

So many ways 4

You can self harm 5

Pop some pills 6

A scarf of rope 7

Painless death 8

You have to hope 9

Pray to die 10

Or live to kill 11

Suicide 12

One big thrill 13

The metal gun 14

So shiny, new 15

Mortal arrow 16

Points at you 17

Breath of life 18

Fumes of hate 19

Step in the car 20

To suffocate 21

I choose to live 22

I choose to die 23

My life and death 24

Both pass me by.25

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  • afflicted
    June 30, 2005
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    thank you!


  • petrichor
    June 28, 2005
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    This is a really powerful poem. I really liked it. The rhyme was good and everything flowed. Keep up the good work.

  • VinillaLace
    June 28, 2005
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    Wonderful poem, full of emotion, I like the way you put yourself out there