When night has fallen deep the path is dark 1
and steps may be uncertain that we trod,2
when troubles toss the heart and hope seems stark3
He says, 'Be still and know that I am God'.4
The beacons on the journey are not few;5
for those who seek it is no mystery6
that they are placed with care to guide us through,7
illuminating life's epiphanies.8
Her poetry, it lit the path ahead9
as if by some divine and warming ray.10
By lines of graceful wisdom I was led11
to see, with clearer eyes, a peaceful way.12
A gentle beam of goodness through the night;13
her spirit is a beacon of His light.14
Author notes
Inspired by two of my favorite poems, not just on this site but anywhere, by MargaretG.
One complete line was taken from 'Stillness'. (1st stanza, 4th line).
Stillness- allpoetry.com/poem/708023
The Beacon- allpoetry.com/poem/786947
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A poem I know BarbaraG or NancyP or whatever her name is will appreciate, not only the subject matter but the sentiment. How wonderful to be called a "gentle beam of goodness" (I was called, "Mostly harmless" once.)It's a wonderful poem and I'm sure PenelopeC loves not only the poem but your kindness.
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I recognized the poems you received your inspiration from. This is a wonderful sonnet. I am so hoping to get the iambic part down before too long. Reading yours and Magarets work is a good place to begin learning. A beautiful sonnet tribute.
Sam
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She does inspire us in so many ways, and here her work inspired you to write a beautiful sonnet!
We can see her spirit on every line in this poem, and you girl wrote it with perfection.
Thanks so much for bringing this juwel to us
Wishing you all the best in everything you do,
Mari
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This is just plain gorgous,I was going to enter this because I respect Margaret so much,but ya know ,after reading this fine piece,anything that I could compose would be a step down....This is quite a wonderful work Mary
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As a postscript, your background is perfect, I cannot see a rose without desiring to smell it.
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Hi Mary,
Your acknowledgement of the deep respect and friendship Margaret has provided you with is both touching and very obviously sincere. I couldn't agree more, for there have been many occasions in the brief time I have known her that she has been like a beacon of wisdom to me personaly, as well.
As always, your form, rhyme and meter are well done and I offer high praise and applause.
s,
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sonnet perfection
Dear Mary, this is graceful and lovely, and I'm very grateful to have been one of the lights for you. I in turn must acknowledge the people who were lights for me, my counseller Wanda, and my AP friend Sea Angel, and the greatest light, whose brightness is beyond expression, Jesus. We can't get through life alone, all of us are leaders and followers.
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yes i agree with baldone Mary... beautifully said... gorgeous even
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beautifully said Mary, your caring for oyur friend shines through strongly on this one, this is an excellent sonnet in my eys and speaks clearly with your voice...peace Terry
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Kindness bestowed here!
Wonderfully composed Mary6. I am impressed as I am sure MargaretG will be also. I broke away from my complation and this was a breath of fresh air for me. Good luck in the running! Cisco
Edited on Jun 26, 1:59 p.m. because ''.
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