<background: Bryan is a 19 year old boy who has just lost his mother,who he was very close to, and is trying to figure out why she died. It wasn't a natural death, she was stabbed>1
Brian: Have you ever really thought about life? I mean really thought about your purpose in life and why, if our world is in such a bad shape, the "god" that everyone talks about doesn't destroy us and start over? Why are there so many people on this Earth that do nothing but take up space and waste water?2
I'll tell you why, it's because people are stupid! All people, not just the bums sitting on the street corner or the kids out back smoking pot but everyone. Abraham Lincoln, Albert Einstein, Alexander Grahm-Bell, all are stupid. Yes that's why, because people are stupid. Were smart enough to have schools like Harvard and Yale, but we still can't figure out how to live without wasting our resources, cutting down the rain forest, or, my personal favorite, war.3
Now you want to know the meaning of life? Sure you do, so I'm going to tell you. The meaning of life is blah! See now I have you thinking, "How can the meaning of life be blah!?" Well its simple the same way the meaning of life can also be Swish! alright now I'll explain. Life doesn't have a meaning in the sense that most people think of, its not about preparing for heaven or damning yourself to hell or anything like that. Life's only real meaning of life is to have a blast and be with the people that your love. Ha Ha now that makes more sense doesn't it? 4
Author notes
ok i wrote this for school so tell me what you think so i can fix it if need be. by the way it isn't finished yet this is a rough begining ill let you know when ive finished it.
What did you think? Please comment!
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enertaining...yes....factual or hard hitting or thought provoking...not so much...u made a lot of strong statements...but failed to back them up...and bums on the street are actually quite smart...they see things differently than most pple and that makes them infinately valuble...and while grahm-bell isnt all that great...lincoln and einstein are effin brilliant...i get wat ur tryin to say i think...but its all talk and and no show...where are the facts??? the plans??? the willingness to give up for the cause???
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interesting
yeah it was funny, but i did't get anything out of it. nothing was explained. besides it did not have the neccesary vocabulary to maximize the meaning of this piece. it was just a dry piece of nothingness. sorry dude, but it didn't really make any sense. the message was really chopped up, and slammed together. so thats it but it was funny...
