Once upon a time, on the first day of school, two 10 year-old girls met. Their name were Alice and Adelie. these two girls became best friends until the next school year where Adelie met other people than her, namely, a girl that Alice hates. And, many times in the school year, Alice became mad at Adelie because Adelie went to sleepover at Lizzie's house (the hated girl is called Lizzie). So , Alice became mad at Adelie several times until one day, where Alice was just so mad at Adelie that she never wanted to speak to her again. Now, I,Adelie, is having a horrible end of the year because she is convincing everybody to hate me!!! 1
Once you have read this story, i hope you know how i feel...2
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i'd just like to say thank you to ALICE to have ruinned my life. i will get my revenge...
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where did i write ur last name?!?
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ADELIE U IDIOT!!!!! take my last name out of your comments you idiot. we're on a site and we don't know who could be on it...get it offffff!!!!!
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hello dee dee
nice one i mean lol
glad u made peace
btw if u want to post anything about me if we get mad (lol) dont put my name and especially not my second name
thx
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granny goose,
you are a really nice person, you know! thank you for explaining to me how we delete a poem! even though i already knew how to,i can see the intension! thank you alot!
Adi Woodpecka
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I just realized that you have this story posted three times. I did that accidently myself one time. What you can do is delete the other two since they don't have any comments on either of them yet. To delete, just go to 'edit' at the top of the poem. It'll take you to the page where you can check 'delete this poem'
Granny Goose
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A touching story, Adi, and I sure know how you feel.....I have felt pretty much the same way a few times as a young person. Fortunatly I finally realized that sometimes we change how we feel about someone. It's not that we hate that person, but when we're young we don't always understand the intracities of a sincere relationship. 'Friends' come and go and we should learn to let go. 'True friends', the kind that hold a piece of us in their hearts and hands, are not nearly as easy to come by. Both kinds of friends should be appreciated and cherished. The first kind is a moment in time, the second kind are a treasure of the heart. Both have their purpose in our lives.
Your story speaks of friendship lost, and I really do know how you feel. Right now your angry and upset...don't allow that to overshadow the goodness in your heart. When we turn our emotions to vengeance, ill feelings towards another person, for whatever reason, it has a tendancy to taint our overall thoughts and feelings, spreading it to others whom we don't mean it to. Go on with your life, my dear. You'll be happier, I promise
Writing is such a good way to express ourselves, calm ourselves, get out those feelings we sometimes can't bring ourselves to talk to someone else about.
Keep writing
Granny Goose
Edited on Jun 26, 10:54 because ''.
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