Post-poned EverAfter

I'm Cinderella's stepsister1

left behind after the ball.2

I'm milk maid in the shadows3

when Belle gets the attention of Geston.4

Dear Hermia finds her love5

while mine is caught by her as well.6

I'm Maia, once called Thumbelina 7

waiting to find my flower'd prince to place my bail.8

I'm Ariel's older sister9

left behind under the sea.10

I had the had the prince's eye11

before Buttercup arrived.12

And though Dessi is dead13

she had a man to her side.14

As Snow White straddles a steed,15

I Briar Rose am forgotten.16

And yet you looked at me17

saw me for who I am.18

You raised me up19

only to let me down.20

My happily ever after construed 21

I'm so confused.22

But I hope there a few Aragorn's23

before my Eomer comes around.

Author notes

I edited a bit. I'm not as melancholy as I was when I wrote this, but it lingers a bit. Kinda like the Cranberries.

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  • Non Paix
    April 20

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    You need more confidence...You lack it...You shoot yourself down before someone has a chance to bring you back up...You need to think of yourself higher, it will help you. This was a really good write though, aside from your lack of self-esteem


    • InksterMoxy
      April 20
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      ehhh

      you have a point. i don't like it. But you're right. It's kinda weird I can put on the tough face but really self-esteem has never been my strong point. For reason see my published work


  • Lachrymose.
    April 1
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    Very lovely. I fell the exact same way.