her life 3

Sha walked into the kitchen and picked out a frozen pizza and put it into oven. "i guess it's just me for dinner again." Sha said feeling relieved that her father wouldn't be there."he's probably with one of his lil whore's again." Sha thought with disgust.1

after dinner Sha turned on the radio and called nick."hello" nick answered. "hey nick it's Sha what's up?" "oh hey Sha. Sha why did cut again?" nick asked. "ummm cause i had already took all the pills." Sha said quietly. "Sha..."nick started. "nick no one cares bout me, no one would even notice if i died." Sha interrupted crying. "Sha i care about you Sha i think i..." "nick i got to go sorry my father is home bye." Sha hung up before nick could finish what he was going to say.2

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  • eastbrook
    July 14, 2005
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    there are a few missing words but i think i got the picture... is it john to your dad? god these scare me...these stories of yours

  • BLaCK aRRoW
    July 1, 2005
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    this is a good story your writing. For some odd reason these types of story's are my favorite ta read. Anyways i hope ta read more of it. Take Care.
    -Erica

  • nobodys-girl
    June 27, 2005
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    thankyou so much! you have no clue how much it means to me and i'll try to have the chapters longer! thanks agian!

  • ruiven
    June 26, 2005
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    the only thing i don't like about this story is the chapters r so short wutever tho!there great!i love the storys and can't wait for the next!
    ~raven

  • Faithfull2Him
    June 26, 2005
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    Are you going to write an end to this or what?

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