Lucifer sat on her mound,2
Meditating her days,3
Regally informed,4
Forever the most beautiful angel5
Vanity over came her not,6
Greed was not her feeling,7
She was God’s right hand8
A question lies in the trees,9
Floating on the summer breeze,10
“How did Lucifer fall?”11
To answer this question,12
A story must be told,13
A tale of Lucifer’s journey14
To Earth15
Author notes
Ryte after fekin this up the first time lets try AGAIN lol yeh so this will be running parallell to my sory EGA wich will inter twine like a big ball of string and be confusing and the suchlike, blame platinum stitches if you dont like it
Rae V
PS thank you to vinillalace for sending me the picture that inspired this story
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Comments
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LOL gdgd im glad to hear it!!! lol am lookin forward to this new story!!! Sky says she wants your "cell" number and msn and i want them toooooo
glad you like it
HNB
Rae V -
LOL!!! Don't blame me! hehe, I'm a good girl!! *devil horns grow and halo falls off* hehe! Yes, I know, everything is so confusing, but it will be order from now on, I promise! Or at least I'll try to get everything in order. hehe. Wonderful write, can't wait for more!
HNB
Always and Forever,
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This bit was written as a sort of poem song type thing to set the scene it was supposed to be like a legend, but its not really well whatever, but it will be a story which will go with my other story EGA
Rae V -
Yeh it was to kinda set the scene and just get me going not sure when the next part will be out cz if i do it i have to plan EGA more lol ach well
HNB
Rae V -
Wow! so cool. Is this whole thing gonna be a poem or is it going to be a story? (i'm confused!)
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LOVE THE PIC VINILLALACE!!
hehehe, no im used to kendals stories...so nout new to me. anyway, love this, bit short
wheres the next bit? l8az love ur lil sis sky xxxxx
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Yeh me nither lol! Thanx for the comment and applause
Rae V -
Awwww hu,This is great, Glad you liked the pic, I cant wait to see what you do



