A chance?

I think a lot of people in the world need someone like you to open their eyes to new things, and I'm pretty sure the world will wait for you if you can wait for yourself...

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That's not to say I don't also think you're a great guy, and I hope you can persevere to happiness .

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  • TNTrouble
    April 14

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    Tis just amazing and sort of makes me feel humbled to know that you feel this way. Thank you for opening my eyes as I sometimes keep them shut ... which does no good at all I have learned. Great entry.

  • Coool Hope you win


  • Rose Hathaway
    March 28
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    Whoah. This is very poetic and went straight to my heart. People do need eye-openers. Well done.

  • WOW.


  • MsAlee gold member
    March 28
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    Fantastically written.

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