her life 2

"where the fuck have you been?" sha's dad john erupted once she steped inside. "dad i just walked home from school like i do everyday" sha replied in a calm voice. "don't use that tone with me you ungratful little bitch" her dad yelled at her. "whatever" sha said as she walked towards her room. the last thing she saw her father coming towards her like he was going to hit her.1

sha woke up in the living room where her dad and her had been aruging." o s*h*i*t my head hurts" sha said as she stood up.as sha started to walk back to her room the phone rang. "talk" she said when she answered her phone. "sha i've been trying to reach you all night!" nick basically yelled into the phone, "are you ok?" "ya sorry i think i blacked out for a lil" sha answered back wishing she could tell nick why she blacked out. "alright so now we need to talk" nick said sounding serious for once.2

"nick im sorry i got to go it's time for dinner" sha said." alright sha i'll talk to u later bye.3

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  • eastbrook
    July 14, 2005
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    whoa wow...has your dad ever done that to you or a family member had that happen... god dammit i wish i knew what you were going through fully

  • confusionismylife
    July 3, 2005
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    good

    this is a good write but kinda scary......you gonna finish it???


  • thegeekinpink
    June 25, 2005
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    that is surprising because it is really good

  • XxThoughtsOfDeathxX
    June 25, 2005
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    ooo this is really gettting good i like it alot.. cant wait to see what he has to tell her.. this is great is suspensful or however you spell it to!

  • nobodys-girl
    June 24, 2005
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    thanks i was kinda worried cause this is my first story!


  • thegeekinpink
    June 24, 2005
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    so far these two stories have been awesome!!

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