her life

Shannan kicked her locker again with hopes maybe once it would open.she tried once again but with no success.she was halfway through her combination when the tardy bell rang."o s*h*i*t" she mumbled to herself. "need some help?" asked her friend nick. "ahhhhh nick your back from ISS! finally it took you like 3 weeks!"Shannan said as she jumped on nick and hugged him. "ha ha ya i know sha" nick laughed as he opened her locker and picked her math book."come on sha we better get to class." "wow nick your actually going to class today?!?" "yup only this once" nick said laughing.1

the last bell had rung and nick was walking sha home."so hows everything been going since i was gone?" "ummmm well I'm still alive...unfortunately."sha said quietly. "sha have you done it?" "have you?" sha asked him. "sha you promised to stop." "well so did you nick!" "sha let me see your wrist." "nick please." nick pulled sha's sleeve up and looked at her wrist. he gasped when he saw all the fresh cuts on her wrist. they traveled up all the way to her elbow."sha why did you do this?!?!" "lets talk bout it later please nick?" "alright I'll call you tonight k? "alright nick bye." "bye sha." nick watched as sha went inside and already he could here her father screaming at her.2

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  • nobodys-girl
    July 14, 2005
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    i wish we could be best friends again too but im so afarid of getting hurt again. and i've been a cutter since the 6th grade.

  • eastbrook
    July 14, 2005
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    since when were you a cutter? w/e that doesnt matter...this seems like a part of your life... or some of what i knew... sadly this is something i knew... now i dont know you... i wish i could help you turn your life around...and i wish our memories would die without vain...and i wish there wasnt this loving hate you have for me... and i wish that we could still be friends like we used to be... have a great life or better than what i knew...i love you soo much

  • nobodys-girl
    June 26, 2005
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    thanks and im really sorry about your friend and ya i am a cutter.

  • Faithfull2Him
    June 26, 2005
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    You know, this sounds a lot like what happened to one of my friends. Except for she bled to death in her sleep because she tore off all of her scabs. You a cutter? Lot's-o-questions, anyway, I really liked the description, keep up the good work.

  • XxThoughtsOfDeathxX
    June 24, 2005
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    i like it alot and i thinky ou did a great job with it keep up the good work i cant wait to see what else is going on with the story..
    Kayla

  • Amy Long
    June 24, 2005
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    This was really sad. I wish people wouldn't cut. I used to be cutter and now for some reason I want people to feel my happyness. I hope your not a cutter. I hope you keep writing too!
    Hugs and Kisses,
    -Amy-

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