Candy

I was mad, I did something I regret very much. I killed my sisters boyfriend. This is ow it happened. I love my sister very much, and I couldn't stand to see her get hurt, but me, myself hurting her is something I can't see. I was with my sister, her boyfriend, and myself (obviously) at the park. There was a huge candy sale, an she wanted some candy. She asked him for candy, you see, but since we just ate he said no. She looked very upset, so I bought her some. That night we went home but I called her boyfriend, Tyler, when she was asleep. I called and asked him to come over to out house which he did, but thinking my sister was on the phone. He came over and I pushed him in the bathtub of boiling hot water, thinking he would just get burnt badly, but it turns out he was fine, until he went to the hospital, and died. I felt horrible, but i thought it was for the best. I told my sister it was my fault, and she killed me, that's why I'm writing this in heaven! Seeing her from this point of view at this minute, screaming, "Hell! Crap!" I think it's all my fault but now I look, this whole incident was done by my OTHER sister!

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  • O.O
    well...
    I uhh...
    sorry your dead?
    XDD
    great job, and keep up the good work, plus I think that you should maybe lengtehn your stories a bit to make them a little better, just a little hint, detail is the paint if a stories a picture!
    -CAMO-

  • IheartEC
    March 28
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    AWEOSME

    LIKE I SAID B4! awesome

  • IheartEC
    March 28
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    omg

    yes random and silly

  • Interesting. Very unique. I have to say I don't think I've read a story like this one before. Thank you for entering my contest.

  • TheDecree
    March 25

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    lol,kinda serious, but funny at the same time. THe joke turned fatal,lol.

    Funny write

    Good luck in the contest!

  • HA HA HA HA!
    that was funny
    it started out really serious
    then it got like instantly funny
    lol
    thanks for entering my contest

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