Fatally yours.

I cry until my eyes shut,1

and pray2

you'll think of me.3

I fall to the ground with my teardrops.4

Dreams dance around in my mind,5

like grass flowing in the wind.6

I wake back in my realety.7

No more riding off into the sunset.8

Back to real life.9

Feel the pain.10

Cry the tears.11

And learn to live,12

without a single toutch.13

For the first time14

I feel the love.15

Fatal as it may be,16

I will always be yours.17

...Fatally yours.

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  • rustic
    November 3
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    I like the twist

    fatefully yours might as well be fatally yours

  • mistiff1983
    May 8
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    Very nice! I think of Fatal Attraction for some reason after reading this.